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Sat Aug 09, 2014 11:03 am
SpiritedWolfe says...



Wow, so sorry, @Cynder
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Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:05 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@Wolfare1, Skyefire is spelled without a capital "F".
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Sat Aug 09, 2014 1:42 pm
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Sorry, force of habit :P
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Sat Aug 09, 2014 2:53 pm
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i'm sorry but i gotta drop out.
  





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Sat Aug 09, 2014 3:07 pm
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We shall miss you Mess.
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Sat Aug 09, 2014 8:37 pm
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:( Bye, @Messenger, if you must...

Wolfare, I like the rivalry idea a lot.
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Witchcraft96 says...



Where do we post the profiles? Do we pm to you? @wolfie36
  





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Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:15 pm
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Hey, @Witchcraft96! I'm glad that we have another wolf joining the pack! To submit a character, go to the Storybook and click "Submit a Character." Just fill in everything and use the profile code thingy I gave you in the "Description" box.
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I do not give to you as the world gives.
Do not let your hearts be troubled
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:29 pm
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Witchcraft96 says...



Okay thanks! @wolfie36
  





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Sun Aug 10, 2014 7:46 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



That was a great post, @Wolfare1! Should I write from Skyefire's POV, or should I let someone else post next?
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:09 pm
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I agree with James, Wolfare! Excellent job! Just one thing... At the very end, you write this:
the question still remained in my mind; whose pup was this?

In a wolf pack, only one wolf, the alpha female, has puppies. http://teacher.scholastic.com/wolves/gabout3.htm confirms this:
The alpha male and female are the only wolves that breed and produce pups in the pack.

Because Kimeya already has deduced that Skyefire is from the Cinereal pack, she would also automatically know that Heather is his mother.

Go ahead, @JamesHunt! I think it would be a perfect time for you to post.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:22 pm
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SpiritedWolfe says...



Oh, I didn't know that! I'll go on to changing that ;) (Shows my limited knowledge of wolves xD)

And, I agree that James should go next.
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Sun Aug 10, 2014 8:26 pm
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BrumalHunter says...



I need to go to bed soon, so I shan't be able to post today, but I shall do so as soon as I can.
But the Fruit of the Spirit is love, joy, peace, longsuffering, gentleness, goodness, faith, meekness, temperance: against such there is no law.
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:53 pm
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Welcome, Scarlet!

Since Skyefire has not been named yet, would Scarlet be currently nameless, also?
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Mon Aug 11, 2014 5:56 pm
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Witchcraft96 says...



Thanks! Well I'm a little confused like would her character be nameless? @wolfie36
  








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