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Fri Jul 18, 2014 6:16 pm
BrumalHunter says...



@Wolfie36, the other wolevs have indeed not yet reached the den. (He and Messenger actually wrote that Ogden, the other pups and I had accompanied them to the confrontation.) And thanks for the compliment!
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Mon Jul 21, 2014 4:44 pm
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AdmiralKat says...



Who's going next? 0-0 I'm so into this now!!!
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Mon Jul 21, 2014 4:49 pm
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I think I might go next if I can find the time, though it may not be up until thursday or Friday.
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Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:34 pm
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Messenger says...



i'm bacl but haven't read all the new posts yet.
  





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Mon Jul 21, 2014 11:43 pm
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Wolfi says...



I could certainly go ahead and post next!
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Tue Jul 22, 2014 12:07 am
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AdmiralKat says...



Do it Wolfie! 0-0
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Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:10 am
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Wolfi says...



:D Ok, I will!
Once the whole Skyefire incident is over, we're going to need a new conflict. Kimeya will probably be accepted into the pack, then after that, I think that there should be some interactions with an "enemy" pack. Probably not Kimeya's, though, since they wouldn't readily accept her if they were aware that she was from that pack.
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Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:16 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



The conflict could involve territory, couldn't it? Since our pack's cove will be burned down and they need a new camp. Oh, Kimeya and Odgen probably won't get along very well, since Kimeya isn't the nicest wolf to pups. (She only saves Skyfire because she wants to get back at the pack, but her plan backfires :3)
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Tue Jul 22, 2014 1:38 am
Wolfi says...



That's right! Yes, a territory issue would be appropriate.
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:07 am
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I'm a little confused about how exactly I should continue the story. Will the pack be split up, as it says in @Fade's post? Or should I pick up the story after @Wolfare1's last post? Fade's idea with splitting up and searching for a new den is fine, it's just that many things don't make sense: particularly, Skyefire is named and Ogden and the puppies are with the pack.
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:16 am
AdmiralKat says...



I don't think we should split up because the confusion XD
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:20 am
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So should I start anew? After Snowflake takes Kimeya away?
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:26 am
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What do you mean by that?
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:27 am
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SpiritedWolfe says...



You should do that, @Wolfie36, but if you do that, I think Ogden is asleep. Maybe make something with that after the unnamed Skyfire has slipped away into the forest.
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Wed Jul 23, 2014 12:36 am
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AdmiralKat says...



Yesh, I'm asleep XD
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