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Hey where do you want snowflake in all this, I mean kimeya saves Skyfire-I think it is-will Snowflake accidently see that and feel more welcoming to her and then when her pack comes around feels betrayed? Or should she help Kimeya? @Wolfie36

@Cynder: I think that Snowflake should catch up with the rest of the pack on their way back to the den. When I write the next entry (hopefully today!), I can include Snowflake's arrival.

I agree with you @Wolfie36

I'm sorry for not posting anything for a while, guys! I'm going to try reallllllyyyyy hard to write it tonight. If anyone is ready to jump in before then, be my guest!

Ooh! I will post! I have been waiting to post for at least five days. I I can't remember exactly but I am eager to post! I will have it done as soon as I can.

Awesome! I'm glad that you are so eager. I can't wait to see your post! Sorry for holding you back for so long...

It is in now! Let me know what you think.

I think we're all having some miscommunication. >.<

So, according to my post, the fire doesn't come until night time, but according to the posts @r4p17 and @Fade made, it's already here. Which are we going with? I can change my post to her waking up an hour or so later rather than night, but I'm kind of confused.

Also, r4, I believe Dazzler was already up before and /just returning/ from the confrontation with Kimeya, while Odgen had gotten up before and saw Skyefire, but laid down for a rest again. Therefore, I would think it would probably be noon rather than the morning.

My final point is Skyefire has not been named yet! That's the entire point of the fire, to save him and name him. (My suggestion for the Skye part is that a flaming branch falls and Kimeya's able to pick him up and jump out of the way before it burns him.) So if your post inculdes him with a name then replace it with something about his looks, such as the bright eyed pup or the russet colored fur pup. Something to that effect.

Did I miss anything? @Wolfie36

EDIT: Alright, that might have come off as a little harsh, but I think better communication should be established. R4, other than those things I pointed out your post looked great.

@Wolfare1 I wasn't really sure when the fire was supposed to be, but I got the impression when I read @JamesHunt's post that Skyfire (whose name I used since I didn't know what to call him aside from that) wandered off on the night of meeting Kimyea and wandered for a while then the fire was supposed to come later on. (Was the thing that he smelled the fire or smoke? I though it was something that started with "m").

You are right about Dazzler though! Thanks for pointing that out.

Even if you don't know what to call him, he doesn't have a name yet. So calling a pup with no name by their future name doesn't make sense. I'm not trying to be pushy, but the perfectionist in me is freaking out, could you change that?

I'll change when Kimeya wakes up to only an hour or so, so it'll align with the rest of the posts.

Oh! I misunderstood the meaning of that! I thought that Skyefire was a temporary name because James hadn't decided what to name him yet. I didn't realize that he was going to name him. Sorry about that. It is done now. Thanks for the clarification!

@r4p14 Yes, please remove Skyefire's name. Nice job on the post, though!
Thank you, @Wolfare1, for clarifying everything for him.
r4p, I want to make sure that you know that Collin is two years old and not a puppy anymore. Normally, he would be with the rest of the pack, but since you joined late, I guess it is okay that he would stay with Ogden just for this time.

Okay. That is good to know. I figured I would be with Ogden since I joined late anyhow. oh and I think you misspelled my name for the tag @wolfie36

XD I'm the keeper of the pups. 0-0 @Wolfare1 I don't think I'm responsible enough...