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Thank you!

Just some things to point out about my recent post. One (Spoiler) Drellis will deffinitely fail in his attempt.

And two, the reason Donnie has all that stuff i described is that becuase he's a voluntary subject, I would assume he'd get better treatment than the others. If you disagree with my descicion, i will go back and remove that little bit of description.

I think the post was pretty good. I love the TV idea, but I feel like the lock bit might be too much. Maybe he has a TV and a snack stash or something, but is still as much a "prisoner" as every other hybrid? Thanks.

We are officially on page 2 guys!

The reason i didn't mention Drellis hearing the gunshot was the fact that his room is farther away from Levi and Grace's room with several security doors and solid walls between him and them.

I will be working on a post for Fawn :3

Hey guys! I'm loving the posts! However, can we please stick to the same time. For instance, Alex was posted in the Gym still with another Hybrid, however at this time socialization time is over and they were sent to their rooms.

It's fine to leave the post! But if we could just follow the same time scheme, I think this will run smoother!

Thank you all!!!

Hi guys. Sorry it's taken me so long to say something; I've been really sick. Kata is going to attempt escape. Sorry about the confusion, I couldn't make up my mind and honestly confused myself! Hope that helps with further posts.

Don't worry, Drellis will fail in his attempt. Wouldn't want to have him escape so soon. I'm accepting ideas for what his punishment should be, because I don't have that creative a mind when it comes to that sort of stuff.

Hey guys! It's getting so intense!!!! So, Grace and Levi (or he will be in a second when I post) are being questioned, Drellis is making an escape attempt and the others... are just sitting around in their cells wondering what's happening? Also, I was thinking maybe Drellis's escape attempt is what put everyone else in action- like they hear he tried to escape and try to work together to get out? (Hopefully I am making some sense here?)

Also, since a lot of the people who joined originally haven't made many posts (There aren't as many hybrids as there were in the beginning?) maybe they could all just escape together? And then separate once they get out it you don't want them to all be in the same space. What do you guys think?

As for punishments for Drellis trying to escape and, you know killing a guard maybe they could (because I doubt they'd want to kill or injure him badly) put him in isolation or something? (So he couldn't talk to the other hybrids for a little while?) Maybe as like an extra punishment the place he is separated to could be something relating to his weakness. Like a freezer or something? (Because in his bio, you mentioned that that the cold was one of his weaknesses.)

Hopefully some of that made sense.

I'm working on kata during the escape attempt

Kata will be becoming conscious in a post or so here. What is going to be happening with everyone else? Also, any tips on how to make my posts longer?

My only tip would be to focus a bit more on the characters thoughts. That's what I do anyway.

Hey, guys. Unfortunately I'm going to have exams for the rest of this week and all of next as well, meaning I will not have a chance to be online that much and probably won't be able to post for a while.

I'd really appreciate if somebody could include Levi in their post and keep him up to date, if possible.

Talk to you guys in a week.

Not a problem! I was actually waiting on you to post because I know you said that they were going to question Levi as well. I will mention him in some of my posts to keep him in, mainly the questioning room with Sebastian and Grace cause I'm going to have waaayyy too much fun with that. XDD


Good luck on your exams and rest up!