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Fri May 02, 2014 3:11 am
Veni says...



Here is my first draft for a floorplan. My apologies, it is only rough and definitely not to scale. But I hope it is useful in you descriptions. Also could you guys tell me what sorts of things you want in the grounds so I can do a grounds layout.

The 1st floor is incomplete because I don't know what to put in terms of classrooms. I have only done our accommodation and I assumed that we were the only newcomers and we were all in the same sleeping quarters so we had a reason to get to know each other. We all share a common room area. If I have forgotten anyone or if you really want to be moved let me know.

And note the label on the third page is meant to read 2nd Floor- Accommodation.
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Fri May 02, 2014 5:35 am
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@Veni your post maid me laugh out loud :3
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Fri May 02, 2014 6:18 am
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AlexSushiDog wrote:@Veni your post maid me laugh out loud :3


May I ask what bit in particular because I am not used to writing a character with his tone?
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Fri May 02, 2014 6:19 am
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BTW are there any NZers who are part of this storybook. I just wanna check I am doing it right.
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Fri May 02, 2014 6:39 am
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I mean the bit where you said your character nearly laughed at the accent XD
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Fri May 02, 2014 6:40 am
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I guess I missed a lot, huh?
  





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Fri May 02, 2014 7:18 am
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@AlexSushiDog well thanks
@Laure I think you have
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Fri May 02, 2014 7:27 am
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You have John Green as your sig!! <3 JG

@Veni, :/, that's what I thought. I might have to quit this then. x.x
  





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Fri May 02, 2014 1:34 pm
TakeThatYouFiend says...



@Laure if you can read through the posts and catch up you can still jump in, just do what I already died did and assume you came a little earlier then everyone else.
Someone asked who my character was, I don't have a character persay, but I may write a post for the head at some point.
Once it is tomorrow in SB time I shall send everyone a pm about their next post. This will be a key plot point. Ish.
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Fri May 02, 2014 11:01 pm
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Laure wrote:You have John Green as your sig!! <3 JG

@Veni, :/, that's what I thought. I might have to quit this then. x.x


I love John Green too. And I don't think you should drop out.

@TakeThatYouFiend, is it ok if I also have plot twists for my character personal. Like other motives for why he joined this school?
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Sat May 03, 2014 1:18 pm
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Any plot twists are fine! I like to think this is a reasonably easy going sb.
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Wed May 07, 2014 12:29 pm
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who's posting next?
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Thu May 08, 2014 1:56 am
Sylar says...



Are you going to send us the PM anytime soon??
A SURPRISE PARTY

FOR ME

YOU SHOULDN'T HAVE

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Thu May 08, 2014 5:09 am
Veni says...



I'm waiting on Alex
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Thu May 08, 2014 5:52 am
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I was,waiting for someone else but okay!
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