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Birathi: The City of Light



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Tue Sep 17, 2013 4:04 pm
KingLucifer says...



Cailey wrote:Oh hey, @Dante could you make a quick edit?

Can you change the letter to be from some random wizard instead of from the King? He was only in charge of the humans- and gave each of the advisors responsibility for their own representative.

You can just make up a random wizard and name for the advisor. Thanks!


Done.
An angel, a knight, a man who will bring light to where there is only darkness, I am the Morning Star, the Bringer of Light, hail to me as I am King Lucifer!

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Tue Sep 17, 2013 8:41 pm
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Awesom! Thanks!
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Wed Sep 18, 2013 1:03 am
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Oh goodness!! One of my rules was to write in third person, and I didn't in my first post. *Gasp* I feel like such a hypocrite! Sorry guys!! I will make sure to follow my own rules from here on out.

Anyway- what I meant to say was the plague:

Starts with a cough-nothing very bad or noticeable. (In fact, at first no one even realized that the cough was connected to the plague.) This can go on for a couple of days or several months.

Then comes the fatigue- the victim grows tired and weak. This usually lasts 1-5 months.

Fever, and along with the fever is unnaturally pale skin and dim eyes. (Anywhere from 5 days to 7 weeks.)

The headaches, as the victim goes seemingly insane with pain and often this is accompanied by hallucinations and ravings. Usually just one miserable week.

The sleep- this lasts about a week, and nothing wakes the victim.

And finally, death- sometimes the victim is still sleeping, sometimes they awake first and the fever and cough and headaches return with a vengeance for a day or two before death's arrival.
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Wed Sep 18, 2013 1:25 am
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So Razley is risking her life right now by going into the city. I'm not going to have her contract the plague, but one thing is for certain, she hates fire. @Janika, would you post already, I know your not that busy!
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Wed Sep 18, 2013 2:56 am
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@Dante:

First of all, you don't know whether or not i'm busy, so don't assume i'm not. If I weren't busy, then I would have already, which doesn't take much common sense to realize. Second, I don't know when i'll be able to post because my computer is screwing up, hopefully i'll be able to post tomorrow. Alright?
"What is dead my never die, but rises again, larger and stronger..."

*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Wed Sep 18, 2013 12:36 pm
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janika wrote:@Dante:

First of all, you don't know whether or not i'm busy, so don't assume i'm not. If I weren't busy, then I would have already, which doesn't take much common sense to realize. Second, I don't know when i'll be able to post because my computer is screwing up, hopefully i'll be able to post tomorrow. Alright?


See your computer may suck, but it doesn't suck that badly!
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Wed Sep 18, 2013 2:08 pm
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Goodness, calm down. It's not like we have a deadline or something. :)
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Wed Sep 18, 2013 4:21 pm
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Dante wrote:
janika wrote:@Dante:

First of all, you don't know whether or not i'm busy, so don't assume i'm not. If I weren't busy, then I would have already, which doesn't take much common sense to realize. Second, I don't know when i'll be able to post because my computer is screwing up, hopefully i'll be able to post tomorrow. Alright?


See your computer may suck, but it doesn't suck that badly!


Actually, it does. It took almost all night to do that post because my computer kept screwing up.
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*Ride like Lightening, crash like Thunder*


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Wed Sep 18, 2013 9:52 pm
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Cailey wrote:Goodness, calm down. It's not like we have a deadline or something. :)


We act this way with each other though! ):
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Thu Sep 19, 2013 1:21 am
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Well, I guess as long as there isn't any bloodshed... :D
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Thu Sep 19, 2013 2:10 am
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I make no promises :)
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Sun Sep 22, 2013 11:44 pm
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Why isn't anyone posting?
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Mon Sep 23, 2013 12:49 am
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Good question. I guess I can start the meeting since no one else seems to want to post. :D
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Mon Sep 23, 2013 1:31 am
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Cailey wrote:Good question. I guess I can start the meeting since no one else seems to want to post. :D


@Stellabeam: If you post before I do tomorrow, it's time to get Razley and Kati talking. Oh and Razley talks about herself in the third person unless she's casting spells.
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Mon Sep 23, 2013 1:35 am
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So, once the Drifter shows up we get to leave.
So if @NightWolf posts, then we can get out of the palace an begin the journey. Or you guys can start talking in the palace while we wait for the Drifter to show up.

Speaking of which, anyone know how to make a map?
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