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hannah, these are so emotionally poignant - I definitely agree with momo's comment that to read these one experiences some heartbreak for the speaker. I hope that if these are written about real experiences, that if these are still things you are struggling with that you're able to reach out to someone irl to talk through some of these intense topics, because it sounds like so very much to hold. Your poems are very masterful in portraying some of the complexity of struggling with ones' self in a very brooding and thoughtful way.
Some of my favorites so far...
Ooof. That sentence. </3
AH! LOVE Love LOVE that opener. And that whole poem.
Keep up the wonderful work, I am very much looking forward to continuing to read along.
Some of my favorites so far...
i'm playing tug of war with myself,
and both of us are losing.
Ooof. That sentence. </3
if i was a person who was good
at making lists, i'd have two
to keep forever.
list one- things not to remember
AH! LOVE Love LOVE that opener. And that whole poem.
Keep up the wonderful work, I am very much looking forward to continuing to read along.
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