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Wed Apr 23, 2014 9:17 am
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rhiasofia says...



wait....me? What? How has this...oh lordie, I better get to work.
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Thu Apr 24, 2014 5:26 pm
Gardevite says...



Round three! The semis, I think. O_o crazy!
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Thu Apr 24, 2014 7:15 pm
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@rhiasofia @PenguinAttack @Audy

There are just three hours left to get those poems in so be sure to post on time! A 3 point penalty if it's submitted late and disqualification for any poems which are more than seven hours outside the deadline.
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Thu Apr 24, 2014 7:51 pm
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Spoiler! :
[moments]

The wine flows tonight and up flies the corks, and suddenly
we're a throng of jubilant faces fevered in dance, spangled
in sweat and love and drink; there is jazz in our eyes
youth in our veins where my skin burns of glow, and there,
in a quiet nook, a red moon streaks in and bathes us sweet
in its nectar and I'm a locust
dipped in its amber
stuck between immovable and unstoppable.

I see our future,
how in a hundred years when you've uncovered my body
found me petrified in stone and froze and alone you will see this part of me here gone by the moment, but still hanging on to the skirts
of your eyes, grasped in every blink,
braced in every dream.

It shall feed us long after the candle blows,
after the last glass is served and they on their wayward footsteps go,
this moment will rebuild us long after the beauty fails,
and the bats roost inside the caves of our heads.

We're defined by this;
we clench it in our fists,
they're blades
to fight another dawn.
  





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Fri Apr 25, 2014 12:56 am
PenguinAttack says...



ugh time differences.

Spoiler! :
8.
I have forgotten
how many kaleidoscopes
I had to break
to see through your eyes
each one was too small
and too perfect
geometric and fractal
pattern pattern pattern
but you are not that lens
you are the colour and the light
but smashed and remade
so many times that sand
falls from your finger tips
every time you smile
and that is all I wanted.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Fri Apr 25, 2014 1:40 am
rhiasofia says...



Don't worry, guys, I didn't chicken, despite being in the presence of those far superior to I. Here it is.

Spoiler! :
We’re playing God-games behind your dash
as you speed- no, skid recklessly,
splitting the asphalt in two.
We drive head-on into summer &
I’ve never felt so alive
the open windows tell us all we need, the
innocent blue stretches out over us
constant, feverishly following our trail,
but never quite catching up.
Together, we’re better
even than the sky as it
stumbles behind, caught
in our blur of past and future.

My life is on the line with yours
for lunch, but not just;
for those smiles, too, which you
pass me over console,
over table, over
hot summer air
rent and rippling with the
soft glow of smiling eyes.

They make everything out to be a secret,
so I keep it
wrap it round my pinky and
promise.
Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings
  





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Fri Apr 25, 2014 6:18 am
Rydia says...



Thanks everyone! The poems are now being judged, please standby...
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Sat Apr 26, 2014 7:42 pm
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The results will be released tomorrow morning and then our final shall commence!
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 9:08 am
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The results are now in and sadly, I did have to take points away from @PenguinAttack and @rhiasofia for their late entries and since both of the sets were very close, this means that @Audy and @HighTop have progressed to the next round! I'm really impressed with the quality of the poems in this semi final and neither of the runner ups should feel bad about going out at this stage!

That means the final will be Audy vs Hightop and I will need a poem from each of you between the 28th and 30th April 10:00pm GMT to 10:00pm GMT.

You may submit any poem written in April, including any previously submitted.

Here is a visual progression of the competition for anyone interested to see the finer detail: http://i278.photobucket.com/albums/kk93 ... 38b45e.jpg

Best of luck to both our finalists!
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 9:41 am
rhiasofia says...



What time was the cut-off? I was under the impression that it was 10 pm, and mine was entered at 9:40 pm
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 4:04 pm
Rydia says...



It was 10pm GMT but yours was 1:40am GMT.
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 4:07 pm
rhiasofia says...



Oooooh time difference. Oops, my bad entirely then. That makes much more sense, I'm glad you told me so that at least next time I can figure out how much earlier to do it :)
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 4:13 pm
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Yeah, sorry about that! Timezones always make these events so tricky. Maybe next time we'll have to put the times up for multiple zones so people can work out their best day for posting.
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 4:19 pm
rhiasofia says...



That would probably be a really great solution.
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Tue Apr 29, 2014 10:20 pm
Rydia says...



@Audy and @Hightop there are just 23 hours to submit your final poems! Best of luck to the both of you!
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