I've been working this since I was in high school, this story isn't done at all.
So I would love to have someone to help me to advance this story to its full potential.
Right now I'm enrolled to school full time, on the weekdays. I'm free on the weekend ONLY!
The only way I'm up to date is through my email: bernabe.jeanette@gmail.com
So far this is the plot but there is too many characters to fill out.
The Dawn of Blood
Far into the past, there was an Angel that has descended from the heavens.
Bringing ill news that the world was coming to an end, it was her mission to tell the news to the humans. As she travels the world to find someone that would hear her ill news. This young angel traveled yet she was mistreated because she was speaking nonsense to the people. The angel finally her time was slowly ending to walk to the earth and return to heaven. She didn’t want to leave without someone to hear her. As soon a mob from the church was hunting her down in a forest, she tried to escape. To escape she jumped down from the cliff and two small children found her while they were fishing. Her light was fading and fast, she tried to speak to the boys. One couldn’t hear her but the other did. The angel couldn’t finish as she was forced back to the heavens. As a tear of hers’ fell inside the eye of the young boy that could listen to him, he was marked by the angel.
Hearing the sweet angel saying she would come back to him, to tell him the news she had to tell him. The young boy that was marked, (The Good Brother) he told his stories to his children and it was passed down to the family. The other brother (The Evil Brother) couldn’t believe the nonsense that his brother was saying. So he left, with anger and envy for his other brother that was marked by an angel.
As time passed, the story now comes to a young boy and his twin brother. One still marked by the angel and, the other still hating his brother for being marked by the angel. On the eve of their grandfather’s death the angel and her guardian descended from the heavens, to the one that was marked by the angel long ago. As the other brother drinking his sorrow away in a bar the Devil himself comes to him.
The angel tells the brother that he was marked to be in a great war with evil itself, those that were marked with the seven sins.
The Devil tells the brother that is full of anger that he was marked to be in a great war with good itself, those who are marked with the seven virtues.
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