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Sun Aug 30, 2009 7:46 am
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October Girl says...



Sparrow gave him a hard stare. She crossed her arms over her chest.

"Well that depends." she said, leaving somethings to be unseen.

"Depends on what?" he asked.

"Do you really want an explanation? Or do you want to master and discover the gift I've given to you?" Sparrow cocked her head and made her eyes a little more soft.
We're meant to be one
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 11:23 am
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Ceder frowned and eyed her. "And why can't I have boht?"

"Just can't."

"Fine." He took a deep breath. "I'd rather master the damn thing, whatever the hell it is."

**Short, sorry**
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Mon Aug 31, 2009 3:30 pm
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Sparrow smiled, happy with his answer.

"Good. Because the other answer would have been me cutting off your head." she smiled as she threw a sword at him.

He caught it single handed. "What are you talking about? I want to know why the hell I can do these things."

"Well, to put it bluntly. Your a vampire."
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He stared at her for a few minutes not knowing what to say. "Alright." He replied as he threw the sword back at her hoping she caught it so he didn't have to figure all this out on his own. She caught it with ease and set it back down.

"Follow me, we need to go get some things for you." She said.

"Like what?" He asked.

"Clothes and weapons, things we will need." She replied.

"For what?" He asked.

"Just stop the questions." She replied shaking her head.

"Why?" He asked with a smile.
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 6:15 pm
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Sparrow shook her head, he was like a newborn!

"You'll need a room, as well." she said walking gracefully across the hallways.

"Why can't I just share yours?" he smirked.

She stopped and turned around to glare at him. "Because... you wouldn't wake up."
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Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:29 pm
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He crossed his arms. "Really? Cause I'm sure you'd enjoy it." He smiled. She was in front of him in seconds.

"Would you like to die?"

"I thought I already was dead." He replied with a smirk.
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Fri Sep 04, 2009 5:44 pm
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Sparrow dug into her pocket and pulled out a Rosary and shoved it close to his face. He doubled over in pain.

"What is that?!" he groaned.

"This, is a rosary. I'm immune because I am no longer a fledgling, unfortunately YOU are." she growled.

"OK, OK I get it. Put it away, please."

She shoved it in her pocket and gently swayed down the hall.
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Fri Sep 04, 2009 6:33 pm
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Ceder growled as he watched her go. He got up and walked after her his eyes noticing how her hips swayed. He shook his head.

"Sorry." He said as he got closer.

"Don't do it again."

"Yes, Mother." He smiled inside but kept his face stiff.

"What did you call me?" She demanded.

"Well you made me, so doesn't that make you my mother?" He said putting on an innocent face but moving back so she couldn't use the rosary.
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Sat Sep 05, 2009 2:10 am
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Sparrow felt like she was going to snap!

"The last thing that I am to you, is your MOTHER. I'm more like your guide, you listen and you live. Understand rubber band?" she growled.

"Sure, so your like my girlfriend?"

She turned around and caught the front of his shirt, which was difficult since he was so much taller than me. "You're with me thats all you need to know."
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Mon Sep 07, 2009 2:23 am
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"Just great, I'm a boy toy." He growled. She frowned and turned walking down the hall. He hurried to follow rolling his eyes.


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