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The Kill



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Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:37 pm
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Caralina looked him in the eyes and frowned. "Fine. But I hope the couch is comfortable." She turned on her heels and stormed back to the bedroom laying back down and pulling her legs up to her chest. Tomorrow she would rid the house of any and all liquor she could find. She would not have him get drunk again.
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Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:24 pm
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Sterling ignored her, she still didn't trust him. It was really starting to get on his nerves. Colt gripped Sterlings index finger and made a sound like most babies do.

Babies... Was this his last child he'd ever have with Lina? Or anyone else for that matter. It didn't matter, they would be bound by Colt for the rest of their lives. He loved his son.
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Thu Jul 30, 2009 8:12 pm
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Caralina woke up the next day and got dressed walking to the kitchen and starting the coffee. She walked back to the bedroom as Colt started to cry and she froze. He wasn't in his crib. She walked to the living room to see Sterling holding Colt.

"Morning." Sterling smiled as he handed Colt over so she could feed him. SHe didn't say anything as she sat down and started feedin ghim as Sterling went to get his coffee.
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Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:21 pm
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"What's wrong?" he asked.

She stayed silent. Was she mad at him?
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Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:48 pm
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"Nothing, I'm fine." She replied as she finshed feeding Colt. "I'm going to get ahold of my sister today and have her come over."

"Sounds like a good idea to me, you two have a lot of catching up to do." He replied withed a nod.

"Uh huh." She burped Colton and then walked to the kitchen getting her own coffee.
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:52 pm
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He looked at her, she wouldn't meet his eyes. He knew something was wrong.

"Don't try leaving Lina."

Her head shot up but she still didn't meet his eyes. "Why not?" she asked.

"I won't lose my son, and I'm not losing my wife either."
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:45 pm
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Caralina bit the inside of her lip to keep from snapping back. "Right, the one you don't care shit about!" She hissed standing up. "Ya, well you know what? If it wasn't for Colt, I'd be long gone." She spun around and stormed towards the back door.



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Thu Aug 06, 2009 3:08 am
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Sterling hesitated. If she left... If she stayed.

He had both sets of keys. She never had time to create spares. She wasn't going to get out of here with a car unless she called her sister. He was irrated.

**Going camping ^__^**
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:25 pm
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***Ok, i've nothing. Long day***
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:31 am
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**I have no idea where I was going with this**
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:36 am
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**OY, I'll try and post tomorrow. But I can't promise anything. I start school tomorrow :S So I don't know if I"ll come up with any ideas for htis one.
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Mon Aug 10, 2009 11:07 pm
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ok
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Tue Aug 11, 2009 1:53 am
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After a while Caralina decided she was tired of hiding from Sterling. She walked back inside and looked at him.

"Sorry." She said wrapping her arms around her shoulders. Colt was laying in the crib.

"I should probably apologize too." He replied walking over and rubbing her arms looking down at her. "Whenever I'm in a good mood you seem to be in a bad one. We should fix that." She nodded as he pulled her into a hug.

"One thing." She said looking up at him.

"What?" He asked.

"No more lies." She said softly. "Please."
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Tue Aug 11, 2009 2:41 am
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He picked her up and kissed her.

"No more lies." he kissed the corners of her mouth. "I love you."

She smiled. "Well thats good."
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Caralina relished in hearing those words. "Do you know how long I've waited to hear that?" She asked between kisses. He chuckled softly and looked down into her eyes.

"I just didn't know how." he replied softly.

"Easy. I. Love. You." SHe smiled kissing him again and letting her arms wrap around his neck. This was perfect. He loved her, she couldn't be happier, well at the moment.
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