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Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:18 pm
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October Girl says...



**What do you mean? Wait.... Is this the ending?**
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:16 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



****No, I'm just saying when I write stories my characters get happy endings. :'( ****
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Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:25 pm
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October Girl says...



**Thats not so bad. Is it?**
We're meant to be one
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Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:26 pm
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October Girl says...



**Thats not so bad. Is it?**
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Sun Aug 02, 2009 8:45 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



****No, I just want one. :P Don't worry about it. :P Your go. :D****
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 7:49 pm
October Girl says...



want one what? I'm so confused**
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Mon Aug 03, 2009 11:42 pm
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A happy ending. :P well a happy now and forever :P It's an impossible wish.
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Tue Aug 04, 2009 4:15 am
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October Girl says...



........ I don't get it :(
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Tue Aug 04, 2009 2:10 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Don't worry about it, I've forgotten what I was talking about anyway.
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:58 am
October Girl says...



**OK :lol: you think you could re-post. I'm kind of confused**
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 11:35 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



"What are you thinking?" Dawn asked looking at Dante.

"That I'm the luckiest guy ever." He smiled at her. "I've got two wonderful girls in my life."

"I love you." She smiled.

"I love you too."

**All I had :S **
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 2:30 am
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He smiled and craddled the bundle in his arms. His little girl.

"I love you." he whispered.
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:12 pm
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TNCowgirl says...



**I had posted on this :'( *

*the Next day*

Dawn woke up before Dante did and she slipped out of bed getting to their little girl before she started crying. She nursed her, burped her, then walked down the stairs to the kitchen where COlt was making some coffee.

"I can never get up before you." She smiled at him. He shook his head laughing.
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Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:42 pm
October Girl says...



Dante rolled over, moaning. He was in pain his abdomen ached like someone had stabbed him. He turned over and pressed his hand against the pain and felt something sticky and wet. He looked at his hand and saw blood. He felt a more severe pain and jerked upward. At that moment he fellout of bed and onto the floor. He saw feet infront of him.

"I told you, I'd get you back some how." Ezra smiled evily.
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Fri Aug 14, 2009 12:11 pm
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Dawn heard a thud upstairs and she took off running for the stairs Colt behind her. She opened the door and gasped.

"DANTE!" SHe ran over to him. "What did you do to him?" SHe demanded glaring at Ezra.

"Lil' of this lil' of that." Ezra smiled. "How is the new mommy."

"Get the hell out of my house." Dawn said as she rolled Dante over and looked at the wound. She felt his heard slowing and she quickly put her hand over the wound speaking quickly. It had to heal, it just had to.
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