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Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:58 pm
October Girl says...



Katy raised her eyebrow at him and shook her head.

He glared back at her, although he looked like he was annoyed at the least.

"Yeah." Eric said over the phone. "I'm not sure... YES damnit! They got VERY close this time," he rubbed his hand over his face. "Well... I could tell them but their not going to like it... Alright... Tomorrow then? Alright." Eric closed his phone.

Amanda was finally quiet and fell asleep. "What... What is it?" Katy asked.

"Yes, what is it?" Tyrel asked, annoyed.

Eric ignored Tyrel and kept driving. "I just got a call from the captain... he, he wants you two seperated."

Katy's eyes went wide. "What do you mean seperated?"

"He wants you and Tyrel in different safe houses." Eric said. "And it's an order." he seemed grim about it.
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 8:38 pm
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"Hell no!" Tyrel hissed. "No way! You cna't make us. We have a right to leave protective custody! I'm NOT leaving Katy or Amanda. You can just tell that captain of yours to shove it, we'll take our chances on our own if we have to. I have a feeling we'd be better at it anyway!


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Wed Apr 15, 2009 9:30 pm
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"Fine! Go out on your own, but let Katy talk for herself you arrogent ass!" Eric yelled, if steam could come out ones ears, it was his.

"I'm trying to protect her!" Tyrel yelled back.

"You have no idea how to protect or love anyone." he shook his head.

Katy looked between both of them she had no idea what to say she felt like she was choking on thin air. She saw a headlight glare and looked back.

"Their following us." Tyrel growled.

"Thank you, Captain Obvious." Eric sped up.
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:53 am
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Tyrel growled. He heard a gun shot and he gently pulled Katy down sheilding her and Amanda wiht his body. He wasn't happy. Why would they want to split them up. He was pretty sure that he was the target in all of this, not Katy. He wasn't sure why he would be, but Katy'd walked in just fine to her dad's house, but if he'd been there there would've been trouble.


***UGH***
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 2:28 am
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**its totally fine hon, it'll come to you**

Katy felt warm and safe in his arms. Amanda played with Katy's necklace and looked up at her father, like she knew what was going on.

"Is she ok?" he asked.

Katy held onto his arm. "She's perfectly fine, I'm fine... Are you ok?"
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 10:09 am
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Tyrel nodded. "Ya, but I'd rather you two be ok first." He said gently touching Amanda's head.

"We're fine." She smiled. He nodded.
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:30 pm
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Katy quickly strapped Amanda into her car seat and tried to breathe, for some reason it seemed a little hard. She looked at Tyrel and he mirrored the same expression she had, worry.

"It's alright, we're all going to be o-" Eric said,

That was before another BOOM! happened Eric swerved and stepped on it.

"Yeah, right." Katy rolled her eyes.
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Thu Apr 16, 2009 4:30 pm
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Katy quickly strapped Amanda into her car seat and tried to breathe, for some reason it seemed a little hard. She looked at Tyrel and he mirrored the same expression she had, worry.

"It's alright, we're all going to be o-" Eric said,

That was before another BOOM! happened Eric swerved and stepped on it.

"Yeah, right." Katy rolled her eyes.
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 12:23 am
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Tyrel growled, he didn't like this at all.

"Hold on." Eric hissed. Tyrel felt the car speed up again and he puleld Katy and Amanda close as he felt the car shake a little, he didn't even want to know what Eric was doing.

"Harm my family, I'll kill you." Tyrel hissed.

"I'm not going to!" Eric growled back.
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:00 am
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Katy didn't know what to do anymore, she was freaking out and Amanda was screaming her head off. They all felt the truck jerk forward, Katy jerked forward and his her head against the seat. She knew what had happened, the tire had popped.
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:08 am
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Tyrel growled as he pulled Amanda and Katy close. "Now what?" He growled.

"Now we get the hell out of here." Eric hissed. Tyrel frowned. "Carry your kid, Katy shouldn't we got to get going. Tyrel took Amanda from her mom and then they slipped out of the truck and took off at a run.


**So should they get seperated?**
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:42 am
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I'm not sure, what do you think?**

When the door opened Katy stumbled again and almost twisted her ankle but lucky, didn't. She heard Amanda crying and it seemed far away, every time she stumbled Eric had to help her up.

**I have no idea where their at???**
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:51 am
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***Me either. :P ***

Tyrel waited until they caught up. "Let me help." He siad.

"Just hold Amanda." Eric said. Tyrel wanted to growl, but he didn't as they moved quickly.


*ugh*
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:26 pm
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Katy heard another shot and screamed. They all ran together, getting into another black Tahoe. she grabbed onto Tyrel's hand.

"Are you two OK?" she asked.
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:31 pm
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"Just fine, how are you?" Tyrel asked looking her over.

"I'm fine, just fine." She smiled. He kissed her forhead softly.

"Good." He sighed.

"Can I hold her, please." She sighed. HE handed Amanda over without a fight.
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