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Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:17 pm
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"It was a great place, the mood we were both in wasn't as great." He laughed as he took Amanda from her and stood up offering her his hand. "I think their ready to go."

"Hurry Up you two." Eric called.

"HE can wait." She frowned.

"We shouldn't stay in one place to long, it's to dangerous."
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Sat Apr 11, 2009 10:33 pm
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**Sorry I wasn't on :( I had a long and horrible night**

Katy looked at him. "What are the chances of us getting shot at... again?" she asked.

"Too much a chance for me to risk." he said and picked her up by her hand. "They might have gotten creative and no longer need to use a gun." he said.

She rolled her eyes. "Over protective."
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:42 am
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****WHat happened?****

"Yes, I have every right to." He replied. "Amanda and I both need you."

"Uh huh." She smiled.

"Don't agrue a point that is pointless to argue. I, we, need you."
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:44 pm
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**My husband was being an idiot and we got into a fight and he didn't come home until like 3 AM :(**

Katy rolled her eyes. "OK, I wasn't arguing." she said.

"Was too." he smiled.

"I was not!" she crossed her arms and took Amanda and got into the car.

"Now you are." he kissed her cheek and she pushed him away.

"No I'm not." she groaned when she realized she was. She just wanted to get home so that all this could be over.
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Mon Apr 13, 2009 1:11 pm
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**HUGS!!! I'm sorry**

Tyrel leaned against the door watching Katy and Amanda, he couldn't believe how much he loved the both of them.

"You two finally ready to go?" Eric growled.

"Yup." Katy replied smiling down at Amanda. Tyrel smiled when Eric frowned cause she didn't look at him.

Take that and swallow it. Tyrel thought with a smug smile.
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 3:16 pm
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In the car everything was almost silent except for Amanda who was squirming and making noises. Katy just really wanted to be home without crazy people chasing them anymore.


**It's ok, he's being a stupidface.**

(Where are our characters going??? lol)
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 5:41 pm
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**I"m sorry**
**I don't know where they're going. Say to another safe house. :P **

Tyrel finall opened his eyes. He couldn't sleep. He stood up from the hotel bed. This was the last hotel until they got to the new safe house and he was good and ready. He walked over to the crib and smiled down at Amanda brushing the hair on her head away from her eyes. SHe was the cutest little thing he had ever seen and he was ready to do anything for her.

He walked back over to the bed and looked at Katy as she slept. He was so beautiful, so peaceful, he was glad she had spirit though. Whenever her eyes were open you could tell she was full of passion and spirirt. He sighed, he didn't know how he would ever prove to her that he loved her with everything he had, but he knew that he was never going to let her go.
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 7:27 pm
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**It's fine, married couples fight all the time right? Just take a look at our characters. LOL I'm suprised they haven't killed each other yet.**


Katy woke up to a loud BOOM! she quickly fell to her hands and knees and crawled, the sliding door had been broken by something but Katy didn't know by what. It sounded again. BOOM! Katy covered her face, it was gun that fired. Someone was trying to kill them AGAIN.

"Katy?!" She heard Tyrel yell.

"I'm right here, where's Amanda?" Katy asked standing up and getting away from the window. "We have to go, we have to go now."

"How the hell do they keep finding us?" he growled and all three of them ran out into the hallway he slammed the door.

"At least you didn't get shot this time." she said. "Knock on wood." she added.
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 7:32 pm
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Tyrel smiled and then hurried out of the hotel. Eric and the others soon joined them rushing them to the cars.

"What the hell?" Tyrel growled once they were far enough away.


*Yup.*
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Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:31 pm
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Katy held Amanda who was screaming and wiggling. Katy rocked the baby back and fourth. Eric said something over the radio to the other officers.

"Maybe if someone was doing their job." Tyrel muttered.

Katy elbowed him. "Stop it." she hissed.

"I'm sorry so now it's my fault?" Eric growled.

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Wed Apr 15, 2009 12:29 am
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Tyrel laughed. "The fact that whoever was on watch was asleep could probably mean you weren't doing your job!"

"Tyrel!" Katy hissed.

"I was on watch and was NOT asleep." Eric growled back.

"Then you must be in on this, you want Katy back so you need me dead!" Tyrel growled.
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:33 am
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"Oh, ok-" Eric rolled his eyes while trying to drive, his headlights were smashed out.

"You should be fired-" Tyrel yelled.

"Alright, ok-" He struggled to keep control of the car.

"You couldn't do your job right and don't care about anyone but yourself!" he yelled.

Eric slammed on the breaks and turned around to glare at Tyrel

"Listen you unhappy, ungreatful, asswipe you don't know anything... ANYTHING about what I've risked to keep you all alive." Eric yelled.
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 2:18 pm
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Tyrel laughed. "Obviously your not doing such a great job." HE hissed back.

*Sorry all I had*
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:01 pm
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**its ok**

Katy glared at both of them.

"Shut your traps, both of you! Your scaring Amanda. So for once will you both just SHUT UP?!" she growled.
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Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:57 pm
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Tyrel leaned back against the seat his arms crossed. He'd be quiet cause she asked, but he wasn't happy about it.


*UGH!!! My mom is being a pain!*
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He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart