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Fri Apr 17, 2009 10:55 pm
October Girl says...



Katy held onto Amanda and rocked her gently.

"That sucked." Katy smiled. "I hope nothing like that happens again." she admitted.

Another bullet.

"I don't want to get seperated." Katy said shaking her head.
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Fri Apr 17, 2009 11:01 pm
TNCowgirl says...



"I don't either." He sighed and then pulled her close and felt the car speed up. "Alright, lets hope we get away. This is old."



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Sat Apr 18, 2009 5:54 pm
October Girl says...



When they finally reached a safe house, it felt like Heaven. But she really missed their house. She looked at Amanda who was asleep in her arms, she brushed some hair out of Amanda's face.

"You guys OK?" Eric asked.

"We're fine, thanks." Katy's voice was so low she wasn't sure he'd heard her.

"This is just for the night. There's no windows and the door is a hella more harder to open." Eric said nodding, a bit pale.
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Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:39 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Tyrel hugged Katy tight and took a deep breath. "I hope this works."


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Sat Apr 18, 2009 6:43 pm
October Girl says...



**so am I**

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Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:11 pm
TNCowgirl says...



So now what?
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 3:41 pm
October Girl says...



I'm not exactly sure
I'm surprised we made it to 40 pages O.o
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Sun Apr 19, 2009 5:25 pm
TNCowgirl says...



***That's really good. :D. Huh, I'm sure there is something we can think of. Right? Maybe we should take it to an ending point and start another one? I don't care. I like this one though. :P I just don't knwo what to write***
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 12:24 am
October Girl says...



**Yeah or like TO BE CONTINUED or some sort. Then we should surely start another one, or like two. :D **
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Tue Apr 21, 2009 1:15 am
TNCowgirl says...



Ok. :D PM me about it. :D




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