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The Last Thing



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Sun Jan 18, 2009 9:02 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Marc's stare burnt the side of her check. She turned round to him and his eyes glared on hers. Shane pulled her away before she could notice something was really up.

"What lesson do you have first" Shane asked Em but she couldn't stop looking back at Marc.

"Emily!" he shouted to get her attention, it boomed through the hole of the school.

"Algabra" She read out.
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Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 10:00 pm
October Girl says...



Shane looked at Emily her gaze locked on Marcs.

"Marc, knock it off." he said, then he realized Fangthe was glaring at Emily too. He looked at Blake and noticed Blake wasn't paying attention and Richard was just blankly staring at Shane, "Come on Em." he said hauling ehr away from his family.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:59 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



When Shane and Emily got in the building he grabbed her hand, everybody gave her funny looks as she held the beautiful pale boys hand.

"Marc eyes.." Emily said, "there just so beautiful, mesmerising" She said,

"Yeah well he seems to have that effect on everyone at the moment"
Every rose has it's thorn..
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Wed Jan 21, 2009 11:40 pm
October Girl says...



Shane

"He just got it, he just descended." Shane shook his head.

"Descended?" she asked.

"When a male in... how shall I say this???" he stopped. "Alright, when a vampire... male turns eighteen, he descends. That means he gets powers... you human would say or he gets new things physically only, and it make him more... powerful as if any of us would need it to hunt or kill."

Her eyes widend.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:25 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



"vampire?" She asked,

"Oh..." Shane said as he reliesed what he had just said, "Emily.."

"Your a vampire" Emily said.

"Yes" He repiled.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:48 pm
October Girl says...



Her eyes widened and then she looked around pressing her lips into a thin line.

"Mhmm." she said sounding nervous.

"Shit." he mutterd. He wasn't suppose to tell her that.
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:02 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



"erm..." She said as she walked off to leason.

"Emily.." He said as he followed her.
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 11:29 pm
October Girl says...



"Emily!" he made a grab for her, he grabbed her arm she gasped.

"Your... so cold." she said.

Shane snatched his hand away. "Emily, you must understand, you can't tell anyone. Blake, she'd been trying to keep this secret longer than time." he said. "Please, promise me..." he said.

She looked around. "I promise."
We're meant to be one
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Then you are my star... ™





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Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:09 am
.:Echelon:. says...



She pulled herself against her and kissed him.

"I promise" She smiled.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:13 am
October Girl says...



He kissed her back and looked at her with hooded and then left.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Tue Jan 27, 2009 12:48 am
.:Echelon:. says...



Emily walked towards her next lesson Algabra, She hated it so much.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


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Tue Jan 27, 2009 1:50 am
October Girl says...



He tried not to think about Emily. He knew he couldn't be together with her, ever, she was human and he was a vampire. It wouldn't work, she would eventually want children, children he couldn't give her. He was dead and she lived, his body was just preserved his body was like photoshopped, he looked perfect.
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
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Tue Jan 27, 2009 2:07 am
October Girl says...



These are pictures of the beautiful people


This is a picture of Blake

(the girl on the Left, the one that you can see her entire face)

http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee30 ... models.jpg

____

This is Richard

http://i96.photobucket.com/albums/l175/ ... ashton.jpg

____

Fangthe

http://i270.photobucket.com/albums/jj10 ... Tipton.jpg
_____

Marc
http://i555.photobucket.com/albums/jj46 ... ffB_03.jpg
We're meant to be one
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If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Tue Jan 27, 2009 2:17 am
October Girl says...



hey lol I was bored so I looked for the family and I just saw alot of people who would fit the part.
We're meant to be one
I know we are...
If I am the Sky
Then you are my star... ™





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Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:21 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



cool XD , Richard is really cute hehe. Im going to do pictures of some of the kids.

Emily sat down next to this girl with blenched blonde hair and heavy make up.

"hey Im Jodie" she said in a strong amercian accent.

"Hey Im Em" She said smiling

Characters(sorry so obsessed with characters

Jodie - http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_9Zf_P9g6cuo/S ... ndelog.jpg

Yoshi - http://3.bp.blogspot.com/_9Zf_P9g6cuo/S ... -girl5.jpg

James - http://1.bp.blogspot.com/_9Zf_P9g6cuo/S ... -boys2.jpg

Adam - http://cdn.buzznet.com/assets/users16/x ... 183943.jpg

Joe(emilys brother) - http://hair.lovetoknow.com/images/Hair/c/c0/Emo_5.jpg

Shaney: http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3232/247 ... 0eab71.jpg / http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2189/247 ... 573a36.jpg
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!








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