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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:08 am
.:Echelon:. says...



"Well Thankyou" he said smiling, "and dont worry I'll keep at least 30cm away from your face at all times, tho it will be hard" He laughed to himself.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:14 am
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"Don't worry, I'm not worried about you. You have respect where others don't." She said as she stared at the set in front of her.

"Thanks." He said again.

"Can we go somewhere else?" She asked looking over at him and then sipping her drink again.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:23 am
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"sure, where do you want to go" He said slightly smiling at her.
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:26 am
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"Anywhere but here." She replied. "We could go to my place and hang out. But I really don't care, just long as I don't end up crying in front of more people again."
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:28 am
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"Ok your place it is" he said as he grabbed her hand and pulled her out the shop. As soon as they left the burger bar, he dropped her hand.

"sorry bout that"
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Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:42 am
TNCowgirl says...



"Long as you don't expect anything to come of it it's cool." She replied.

"What do you mean?" He asked.

"Kris, your my friend, that's it. Your hear for me, and I'm happy about that. But there isn't going to be more to us, not now and I'm not sure if ever."
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