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After The Sunset



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Fri Dec 26, 2008 9:32 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad sighed. He picked her up in his arms and carrried her to his house. He took her into his bedroom and laid her down. He kissed her passionately, then moved to her neck. He kissed it softly, gently, before plunging his fangs deep into her skin, hoping it wouldn't hurt too much.





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Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:07 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Blood dripped out the sides of Emily mouth landing on her pillow. She screams but then Cariad hears her parents running up to find out whats wrong.

"Cariad..." she trails off and falls asleep.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Dec 28, 2008 4:33 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Caiad growled. he was an idiot. a complete and utter idiot. why did he let this happen?! why did he let her convince him it would be fine. he took her back to his house and just guarded her sleeping form, not letting anything happen to her.





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Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:30 am
.:Echelon:. says...



When she awoke the world looked so different through these eyes. The world was so beautiful and as she looked out the window the stars shimered in the sky. In fornt of her sat Cariad. She pulled he self up and kissed him passionilty.

"Thankyou Cariad" She whispered in his ear, kissing his neck as she said this.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Dec 29, 2008 10:26 pm
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Cariad moaned and let her kiss him. He loved the feel of her kissing him. He kissed her back passionately and pulled him back to her. Her new fangs felt delicious on his skin, so sexy. "You are so beautiful." He whispered. His hands ran up and down his arms.
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 12:18 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



"You made me beautiful" She said in a seductive voice as she pulled him closer her and licked his neck. "You taste good too"

Emily kissed his neck again, not wanting this moment to stop but she knew that it would have to soon.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:29 pm
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Carid stopped her and pulled her away, frowning.

"Ehat?" she asked.

"I did not make you beautiful, do you understand? You were already beautiful. and if you had been a vampire when I met you, I wouldn't have been so attracted to you. You were always beautiful, understood?"

She nodded and he smiled. "Good." Then he kissed her nose.





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:36 pm
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"So was I more beautiful then or now" she asked being a tad bit annoying.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:27 pm
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He sighed. "I think both are beautiful in different ways. Your human side was delicate...soft...sweet. This side...this side is appealing, sexy, a little harsh, but I love the fangs." He grinned and bit her neck. "Plus, I don't have to be so careful with you." He breathed in her ear.





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Sun Jan 18, 2009 3:58 pm
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"I think I like the vampy me more" she said as she bit his lip.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Tue Jan 20, 2009 6:02 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



He smiled and kissed her. "Just as long as you are mine, I have no objections." He gently stroked her face, no longer warm to his touch.





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Wed Jan 21, 2009 6:48 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Emily felt so warm inside but their was something she missed. like his cold skin that burnt her touch. she brushed her hand against his face. frowning as she did this.

"whats wrong?"he asked as he kissed her.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Thu Jan 22, 2009 2:30 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



She didn"t respond, so he pulled back and looked at her. "Emily, what's wrong? did I do something to offend?" He asked, suddenly worried.





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 1:19 pm
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"Its just..." She said, "Its just I dont get that feeling anymore"

"What feeling" He asked puzzled,

"The feeling of excitement when I think, Wow Im going out with a vampire" She laughed, "and the feeling of your cold skin burning against mine"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Mon Jan 26, 2009 10:32 pm
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Cariad pulled back and looked at her. "IS...is that bad? Does this mean that you don't like me? That...I'm not good enough anymore now that you are a vampire and I'm still just me?" he was hurt. What if she didn't want him? What if he wasn't good enough anymore? What if she wanted something new...excited? Another human? He whimpered and waited for her response.
"This kind of love is not a product of reasonings and statics--it just comes-none knows whence-and can't explain itself. And doesn't need to." Mark Twain








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