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After The Sunset



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Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:38 pm
.:Echelon:. says...



Emily is sitting in the dark room at the back of her house. She could hear her parents laughing and joking down stairs. She missed that, before her parents found out she cut herself. They disowned her. Now they have Stacey, there perfect little girl.

She walks up to the window and watches the people playing knock a door run, not knowing these kids were immortals. She was having a bad day today, college was going bad, her and her boyfriend split up and her best friend is suicidal.

She wised she had somebody to stay with, and hold her. She didn't have a family no more. And the only person she had cant see her no more.

She climbs out her window and sits on the bench outside her house. Why don't anybody understand me she thought to her self.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:45 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad sighed as he saw everyone rush into their houses. The vampires ruled the earth. people were scared of him...with good reason. His sire was head of the movement which had defeated the humans.

He walked through the empty streets, his feet barly sounding. he felt like a ghost. if people would just try...

He saw a girl...a human, crying. he hesitated. would h mke it worse? would he help?

He slowly moved over to her. "Excuse me, miss, are you okay?"





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:56 pm
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A tall handsome man approached Emily, he looked up at him, her make all over her face. She smiled

"Umm.. yeah sure".

He sat down beside her. She could tell he was a vampire by his sharp teeth and beautiful features. She was not scared nor did she care any more.

"Whats your name young lady" He asks as he grabs a cloth out of his pocket and whips her face.

"Emily"She replyed in a more positive tone "and you?"

He would amswer, his mouth stayed closed. "Should I tell her, she just a mere mortal"

Emily looked staight into his eyes. They were a dark green that showed his oldness.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:05 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad sighed. "I'm Cariad. You're not scared of me?"

she shook her head. "I'm used to vampires."

He nodded. His black shaggy hair shook with him. "I understand..." He saw marks on her arms. they looked like a vampire had bit her over and over. "What happened? Are you okay? He asked concerned, indicating the marks.





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:19 pm
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"umm.. yeh, I did it" Emily repiled to Cariad, He frowned at her.

"why Emily" he asked her a he held his hand out, and she grabbed it.

"I was lonely, My family disowned me" She answered, and thought 'I hope he's somebody who will understand me.

then she remembered leon, her ex. It was his fault to. he cheated on her with her best friend and she still toke him back.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:25 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad sighed. "I do understand...but hurting yourself is NOT going to help. I know you think that it gives you some control...that it lets you be your own person. But it's not good. It just hurts you more."

She looked at him with gorgeous eyes. He touched her cheek...she was so warm. He heard a noise..."You're beautiful...And worthy. don't let anyone else tell you otherwise!"





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:32 pm
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*can we add a picture of our character?*

she smiled, he was the most charming person she had ever met.

"You too" She replyed holding a hand close to his face,
She looked deep into his emerald eyes.

His skin was so cold, but her hands warmed his petite face up.

She could her dad shouting her name as a tear rolled down her face. It was cold and burnt against her warm cheeks.

"oh god" She whispered " I dont want to go back in there"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:43 pm
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad shrugged. "Then don't."

she shook her head. "You don't understand. He's mad...if I don't get in there...He'll kill me..." She whimpered.

He sighed. "Need a place to stay?"

she looked at him shocked. "Your a vampire!"

He shrugged. "Your point?"

"But...you..."

"I don't mind if you don't." He smiled.





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Tue Nov 25, 2008 11:56 pm
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"I do.. but i mean.. You have a place?"She said as she pulled her hand off his face.

"Of course, but i might be asleep when you wake up, but i'll protect wilst you sleep"he smiled,

"ok then" She jumps to her feet, " lets go"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:05 am
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Cariad smiled. "Walk or ride?"

She shrugged. "Whatever."

He grinned. "Get on my back. I prefer running.." He smirked. She climbed up on his back and he took off at top speed. he raced to his mansion. He took her inside and set her down. "My dad's busy...so you should be okay."

**Btw, Vampires don't sleep...**





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:11 am
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**Ok thanks for the tip**

Emily looked around the neat house,

" your dad.. your a vampire and you live with your dad" she laughed, She knew she would be much happier her.

"so.. Im gonna have to hide from your dad" she laughed again,
She was hyper. maybe its the idea of a young girl being carried of by a handsome vampire and hide in his house.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:24 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad frowned. "Yeah...if he comes home. i'm sorry. this was-"

she shook her head emphatically. "No. i'm glad. it's better than my house." she laughed.

he sighed. "Look...you can stay in my room. i'll make sure he doesn't see you. You sure your okay? And you donzt mind being here?"





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:28 am
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"of course"she said, she wanted to stay'a least im with you' but she was afaid how hed take it.

"lets go to my room then, im sorry about the fact you have to hide" he replyed,

Emily walks up to him and holds a hand to his face,

"Dont worry its ok"
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:37 am
Dr. Jamie Bondage says...



Cariad smiled. She was perfect...why did she have to be human?!

He sighed and scooped her up in his arms, carrying her up the stairs. "Do you need anything? A shower? New clothes? Anything?" he asked gently, gazing at her gorgeous form.

He kissed her head softly, then pulled away. "I'll be willing to provide whaever you need."





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Wed Nov 26, 2008 12:45 am
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**Im gonna add pictures**

She blushed as he said such kind words.

"I want to sit with you, that all i ask of you"she said in her sweetest voice,"You saved me from my parents"

She pushed lips against his, shareing a passionate moment.
Every rose has it's thorn..
Just like every night has it's dawn.


I've matured a lot and I realised it was time to come back.. for good!








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