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Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:11 am
Ellyphant says...



**Sorry forgot he didn't sleep*

I loved the way he kissed my neck. I smirked.

"Do you remember any of last night?" I asked pulling away far enough where I could see his eyes. He shook his head.

"Well, would you like too?"
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:15 am
TNCowgirl says...



**Don't be sorry. :P **

"Not if it means drinking your blood again." He replied.

"Why not? Do I taste that bad?" She asked frowning.

"No, you taste that good." He replied kissing her softly. "Plus, I'd rather not remember what Nick did. We're opposites, remember?"


**Sorry, short**
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Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:28 am
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I shook my head.

"But you two are just the same. If you don't want to know how good our night was then it's your loss,"I said. My stomach growled. "I...am...hungry!" I yelled hopping up and running to the kitchen.
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Mon Jul 06, 2009 1:50 am
TNCowgirl says...



Shaun growled and ran after her catching her up by the waist before she got to the kitchen.

"What?" She laughed. He kissed her neck his teeth barely breaking a little skin so very little blood flowed into his mouth. He backed up and as the memories hit, and when tehy were over he leaned against the counter his arms crossed. "Could've given me some warning." She smiled crossing ehr arms.

"Your a tease." He smiled licking his lips. "Those are memories that were worth it."
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Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:44 am
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I giggled and pulled him down to wear his lips were just barely touching mine.

"I know, right? Now, I am starved. Make me something?" I pouted out my lower lip. He pushed me against the counter and nibbled my lip. For some strange reason we were being more romantic than we had ever been.
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Mon Jul 06, 2009 5:47 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Shaun smiled against her lips and then picked her up setting her on the counter and kissing her again.

"I'm still starving." She breathed against his lips.

"Ya, and I am too." He laughed kissing her neck and then walking to the fridge and grabbing the eggs and biscutts.


*Short, sorry*
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Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:22 pm
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I started walking towards him and I paused.

"What?" he asked. I shrugged.

"Have you noticed that I have been able to see for a while now?" I asked just staring at him not expecting an answer, but assuming I was to get one.
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
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You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
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-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:26 pm
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"Ya." He replied not looking at her but smiling as he kept cooking. "COuld be the kid's helping. "

"I doubt it. I can just see." She replied wrapping her arms around his waist.

"If you want this food, you better not do that cause I'll just as soon burn it." He growled with a laugh.
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Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:47 pm
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"Okay," I replied walking to the table. "Do you really think that I'm pregnate?" I asked. This scared me a bit.

*Sorry this is so short!*
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
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-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:53 pm
TNCowgirl says...



**Don't fret**

"Yes, I can smell the baby in you." He replied setting food in front of her.

"GOod or bad?" She asked.

"It smells good. Real good. Just like it's momma." HE smiled kissing her neck and holding her close.
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Mon Jul 06, 2009 6:58 pm
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**Don't fret**

"Yes, I can smell the baby in you." He replied setting food in front of her.

"GOod or bad?" She asked.

"It smells good. Real good. Just like it's momma." HE smiled kissing her neck and holding her close.
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Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:26 pm
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"Thank goodness..." then I looked at him pulling away from his little neck kisses.
"Do you really think that I'm going to die first while she is on Earth?"

**Once again its short
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Fri Jul 17, 2009 9:32 pm
TNCowgirl says...



"Not if I can do anything about it." He said firmly pulling her close. "There is no way I'd ever let you die. Maybe by dying he meant I change you. But you will not really die."

"But what if you can't?" SHe asked softly.

"I will if it's the last thing I ever do. There is no way I'm ever going to lose you. EVER!" He replied kissing her softly.

***Tears***
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:39 pm
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I kissed back hard. I loved him. I loved him being over protective. I loved him caring so much for me. I loved him loving me.

**I'm braindead! =C
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Sat Jul 18, 2009 9:44 pm
TNCowgirl says...



**it happens to us all. Sadly I'm there too. :S ***
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