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Crimson Passion



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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:30 am
TNCowgirl says...



Sean felt her fall asleep and he picked her up carrying her to their room then laying her down and laying next to her. He pulled her close and laid there breathing in the scent. He loved it.

"Sleep well, my love." He breathed into her hair.
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:34 am
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I jerked up as my eyes opened. I put my hand on my stomach and shook Shaun. I knew he wasn't sleeping, but just for the dramatic effect.

"Shaun! The baby's kicking," I said putting his hand on my stomach, too. He looked at me and smiled.
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:40 am
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"She's already strong." He breathed letting his hand rest on her stomach.

"Your not the one she's kicking." She smiled snuggling closer as her hand rested on her stomach too.

"She's so small." He replied as he felt the small spot she was kicking before letting Ettabell feel it too.
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:45 am
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"I know," I squeeled. I kissed SHaun's cheek and decided that I was hungry.
You're more than wonderful
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You're so incredible
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Thu Jul 23, 2009 12:54 am
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Sean couldn't believe it when she told him she was hungry and climbed otu of bed. He jumped up and picked her up carrying her to the kitchen. "What do you want?"

"Food." He rolled his eyes.

"What kind."

"Ediable food." She smiled.

"What kind of ediable food?" He demanded with a smile on his face.

"Cooked ediable food." She smiled kissing him and then getting off the counter and walking to the fridge.
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Fri Jul 24, 2009 4:54 pm
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"Shaun, baby," I said turning around smiling.

"Yes, honey?" he replied with a smile on his face,too.

"Will you cook me some food? I'm craving barbeque," I said wrapping my arms around his waist.
You're more than wonderful
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The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
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Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:38 pm
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Shaun laughed and hugged her. "Alrighty." He got to work on it while she stood next to him.


**All I got. :'(**
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Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:32 am
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* I drew a blank. Sorry*
You're more than wonderful
More than amazing
The irreplaceable
Love of my life
You're so incredible
In these arms tonight
The irreplaceable
Love of my life

-Love of My Life, Brian McKnight.





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Fri Jul 31, 2009 5:23 pm
TNCowgirl says...



***thats fine, i've been drawing alot of those lately. Where do you want this to go? We can time skip to the birth of the baby. Or just start the other one.***
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