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A Vampire Nightmare



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Thu Dec 25, 2008 12:27 am
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Pippa looked at the prince then the others.

"Why do you need guns?" She asked. Her eyes narrowing. "Talents are a lot more fun."

"Sorry, but you don't have telapathy or any other thing that can remove our guns, you can't block out the bullets and if you start to choke us then we'll fire." The Prince replied. She leaned against Zire who was still in a tense position.

"Who says I can't?" She asked.

"We did our tests, you only have defense." The prince laughed.

"And Zire?" She asked.

"He has nothing that is of use." The prince growled.

"You sure I only have defense as you called it?"
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Wed Dec 31, 2008 6:20 am
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"We'll see about that" said Pippa and closed her eyes intending to use her powers.

Before i could stop her a Boulder, close by suddenly floated off the ground and jettisoned towards the prince . Suddenly to both our surprise the rock stopped halfway and crumbled into pieces.

Pippa stood still surprised and now a little scared ad the prince laughed. On the other hand i knew it was a trick. I had studied Vampire powers for decades and never before had i ever seen something like this. It was certainly some kind of trick. I looked around using my mind and sense of smell to determine if there was anyone around us. After finishing my 'scan' i had already pin pointed several vampires who could have stopped the boulder by using the same power Pippa had meaning that one of the vampires had Pippa's power, but as the rock did not move back at us it also meant that that person was weaker than Pippa and could not control his power properly.

I moved closer to Pippa, "Do i t again but this time use your powers to direct two boulders , the first hiding the second"

Pippa nodded and closed her eyes again to which the prince replied "Trying again? Oh well"
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Wed Dec 31, 2008 3:13 pm
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Pippa found two huge boldiers. One smaller then the other and moved them quickly the smaller behind the bigger. The bigger one crumbled to peices and then the smaller flew right into the prince.

"Now what?" She asked Zire.

"Move us." He replied. She looked at him confussedbut decided it would be best to just listen. She pulled more boldiers to them. "What are you doin?" HE hissed.

"Wait." Was all she said as she pulled the boldiers around them spinning them around fast. "I'm gonna pass out when I finish this." She muttered before picking them up along with the boldiers and moving them through the air.
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:39 pm
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And she did pass out exactly after she said it and after she almost crushed the face of the prince.

"Oooh nice shot" i complimented after i caught her limp body.

"Get them!" shouted the prince both angry and surprised.

Several vampire from different directions suddenly appeared around us walking calmly as if they knew what they were doing. That's when i started shooting like hell. The bullets flew everywhere only a little finding their way to their targets. But the vampire were distracted by my shooting so they became disorganized and started to flee, just what i needed to escape.

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I kept Pippa on the ground and sat down there myself. I was not tired but it was a reflex i had to occasionally sit down and act tired. After such a task one should have been asleep for days, and i knew i would be very bored from now on for a while. Then suddenly she stirred making me jump up surprised.
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 3:42 pm
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***YAYAYAY***

Pippa blinked her eyes sitting up. She looked at Zire who was looking at her like she was crazy.

"What?" She asked

"You should still be asleep." He replied.

"Why?"

"Cause you just did so much, your not strong enough to be able to do all that without passing out for days." He replied.

"I reguvinate fast." She suggested. He luaghed.

"I wouldn't be surprised in the least." He smiled at her.

"What happened?" She asked as she twirled her fingers.
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 4:39 pm
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"You passed out" I said.

"Well that's obvious, i mean what happened later?" She asked.

"Well we escaped for one" I said "And then a few Vampires died and then... well, you get the idea"

"I see" she replied then added "Whee are we?"

"We are somewhere..." I explained "...in the forest"

"Well done you managed to get us lost" She said sighing.

"Well at least we have this" I said showing her a ring i had stolen from the prince when excaping.

"And that is?" She asked.

"This will render the prince unarmed for a while until we can get some information about what is going on" I explained "But first we need o get this back on his fingers without him suspecting it.
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Thu Jan 08, 2009 5:19 pm
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"Why do we want to give it back?" She asked.

"Cause, I don't need it anymore. I can get the information on it with what I've gathered already." He replied.

"But he'll be rearmed." She protested.

"Trust me on this one?" He smiled.

"Fine." She replied. She lifted the ring from his hand with her mind and smiled. "It should be easy to put it back on him."
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Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:13 am
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"Oh yeah i forgot to tell you something" I said suddenly "We have to put the ring on the Prince with his knowledge. We cannot put it on his finger with him not knowing what we are doing."

"and how do we do that?" She asked.

"Well, first of all we need to get captured again and put into that prison you were in before." I explained "The rest of it i will tell you once we get there"

"And how do we get there now without the prince suspecting us?" she asked.

"Like this" I replied and shouted at the top of my voice.

A few seconds later we were surrounded by the Prince's vampires.
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Fri Jan 16, 2009 4:40 pm
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Pippa glared while someone grabbed her and pulled her back. A heavy bag was put over her head, probably so she couldn't use her powers. She pulled the bag up with her mind, but it wouldn't come off her neck.

"Don't try, this is meant just for you. you won't get it off." The vampire leading her said with a luahg. She picked up a rock and threw it into what she hoped was him. His yelp proved her right and she smiled.
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Thu Jan 22, 2009 8:10 am
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*Sorry for not replying sooner, i was admitted in a hospital all this while.*

Stop it i said mentally and she did.

"Take me to your leader!" I said comically making them laugh.

Act as if you are completely hopeless and cannot do anything
I told her.

Fine
came her answer.

After a few minutes of being carried on someones back, covered by a large bag, we stopped and were put onto the ground.

Now what
Pippa asked
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Fri Jan 23, 2009 12:34 am
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****WHAT!!!!!!! What happened? Also, I don't know what to put****
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 6:03 am
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**Well it started with a small throat ache that turned into a feeling of my windpipe decreasing in size until i couldn't breath properly and then they said i had Asthma or something like that and i had to be admitted in the hospital for days. By the way we seriously need a new idea for this story!**
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Sun Jan 25, 2009 2:09 pm
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****Wow, that really really stinks. Ya we do. YOu need to be on when I"m on sometime.****
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 2:02 pm
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**And when will that be exactly?**
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Mon Jan 26, 2009 8:47 pm
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Mondays- You wouldn't be on

Tuesdays- All day normally, except from at night from 6-830

((All EST time))

Wensdays- All but 1-3

thursdays- I don't know

fridays- it changes. :D Tuesday is the only one I'm on a ton.
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