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A Vampire Nightmare



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Mon Feb 23, 2009 2:02 am
TNCowgirl says...



Sammie:

Sammie hissed. "I'm gonna kill you both. Especially if you harm Pippa." She wasn't about to lose her shot at the Pippa's powers.


Pippa:

Pippa growled when the bag went over her head. She felt something start to slip on her wrist and she shoved it away with her mind. She yanked the bag off her head and looked at the guards around her. SHe jumepd quickly up into the tree.

"LEAVE ME ALONE ALL OF YOU!" She yelled before taking off into hte woods pulling ricvks along side her to use against anyone that came after her. Seh was tired of it all. She din't know who to trust now.
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:49 pm
Firestalker says...



Zire

She was acting very well, it was to be expected from her after all.

"LEAVE ME ALONE ALL OF YOU!" Pippa suddenly shouted making us all freeze.

She then stormed off.

I tried to follow her but Sammie blocked the way, The Prince blocked me from behind.

I was trapped and unable to do anything.

The Prince

I had finally caught him. and there was no escaping this time.
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Who is not Insane one man ask, the answer being a fool.
Are you Insane the same man asks, - "Oh yes!. The Mad Hatter being saner!"





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Fri Feb 27, 2009 3:55 pm
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Sammie:

Sammie looked at Zire then the prince. If she kept Zire trapped then the Prince would kill her next. She hissed at the thought. She stalked past Zire and to the Prince.

"What the HELL do you think you were doing almost killing me?" She hissed disabling his powers. "I ought to kill you right now!"


Pippa:

Pippa ran as fast as she could. Her body craved blood so she made a small detour to the closest town fi nding i'ts jail and filling it with dead bodies then taking off again. She did'nt know who she coul trust now. Just that she had to get the hell away from them all. Get away from anyone, maybe she'd just go find a way to die. Or she'd get a life, act like she was human. That wouldnt work. She'd have to find a clan or something and live with them acting like she was a normal vampire. She smiled at that. THat would work. When it got dark she went into a town and quickly got a hair cut and dye. She wouldn't be reconized. Then she went in search of a vampire clan.
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 8:15 am
Firestalker says...



Okay I' back again and can clearly see that we need a new plot... again. :cry:
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:26 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Ya probably a good idea. :'(
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:33 pm
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Cause i don't want this to die, so got any ideas?
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 3:53 pm
TNCowgirl says...



Not really, my life is full of Drama right now which I hate! So not really.
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