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Sat Jan 25, 2014 8:11 pm
GoldFlame says...



I'll do...

Any genre, any format. Satire, historical fiction, haikus. I'm more familiar with prose, but I'll review poetry, as well. And prose poetry.

I won't do...

  • Pieces with 4+ decent reviews
  • Essays on controversial topics (religion, abortion, etc.)
  • Fanfictions (exceptions: HP, Sherlock, DW, LOTR)
  • Lyrics

Novels

A no (at the moment). As soon as I'm back on track, I'll do individual chapters.

Review Content

I specialize in grammar, style, voice, and fluency. With me, you'll get loads of nitpicks, ranging from typos to unnecessary prepositions. But I'll compensate. I can always find something positive about a piece.

Review Length

I can't provide a definite length. It jumps around. Check out my last two/three, if you want.

Price

Free! :mrgreen:
Last edited by GoldFlame on Fri May 02, 2014 7:37 pm, edited 80 times in total.
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Tue Jan 28, 2014 10:54 pm
LordGreenleaf says...



Hi there! Could you review my poem

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108098
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 12:09 am
GoldFlame says...



Completed!
Last edited by GoldFlame on Mon Feb 10, 2014 12:47 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 3:21 pm
RachelLeeAnn says...



Would love for you to review this! :)
Masks.
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Wed Jan 29, 2014 10:55 pm
GoldFlame says...



Completed! Who's next?
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Fri Feb 14, 2014 10:12 pm
FatCowsSis says...



I'd love it if you could do this one for me!
Death
What do you call a cow with no legs?
Spoiler! :
Ground Beef
  





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Fri Feb 14, 2014 11:02 pm
GoldFlame says...



Completed! Happy Valentine's Day :P.
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 12:19 am
Rook says...



I'll take you up on this cause you're desperate! ;)
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Instead, he said, Brother! I know your hunger.
To this, the Wolf answered, Lo!

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Sat Feb 15, 2014 1:47 am
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GoldFlame says...



Completed! Happy Valentine's to you, as well.
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 6:22 am
TriSARAHtops says...



Hi, would you be absolutely wonderful an review the second chapter of my novella? I've got stacks of reviews on chapter one, but the second has been languishing in the green room for a while. Here's the link:Saltwater Wounds - Chapter Two
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Sat Feb 15, 2014 7:22 pm
GoldFlame says...



Completed! Who's next?
“He leant tensely against the wall and frowned like a man trying to unbend a corkscrew by telekinesis.” – Douglas Adams
  





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Tue Feb 18, 2014 12:23 am
Sonder says...



If you can find anything in my portfolio that has less than four reviews, I will take any I can get! :)
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Tue Feb 18, 2014 8:27 pm
GoldFlame says...



Aspirations On an Aristocrat completed!
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Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:45 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there goldflame! I would love it if you could review the first two chapters of my novel The Shifties! :D

Please forgive the first chapter as the first section was intended to be entirely separate from the rest as a chapter of its own, but editing on my part ballsed it up! :)

chapter 1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108653
chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108737

Much appreciated! I look forward to reading your feedback! :)

Nerd Bird
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Sat Feb 22, 2014 3:33 am
GoldFlame says...



Both completed!
Last edited by GoldFlame on Fri Feb 28, 2014 8:04 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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