Hi goldflame, I have written a short story which has some grammatical mistakes and I am not able to rectify them. I request you to help me with it and may be give your opinion. Thanks!
"You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up." — Metatron
And its a short story one-off this time! 
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