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Fri Feb 28, 2014 5:14 am
TriSARAHtops says...



Kanome is done!
if we wait until we're ready
we'll be waiting
for the rest of our lives
  





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Sat Mar 01, 2014 2:11 pm
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 11:16 am
TriSARAHtops says...



Hello everyone! Just wanted to make a post to let you know that in a couple of weeks I will not be particularly active cos I'm off on holidays so I probably won't be able to review much. I'll still accept reviews but don't expect to hear from me until probably the end of April. Those of you who have already requested reviews I plan on getting to before then.
Sorry @Purple but I don't review poetry (I should probably put that in bold in the description). If you REALLY want a review I can do it but I won't be very useful. Sorry it's taken a while to get back to you. :-)
if we wait until we're ready
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Thu Mar 06, 2014 1:41 pm
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TriSARAHtops wrote:Hello everyone! Just wanted to make a post to let you know that in a couple of weeks I will not be particularly active cos I'm off on holidays so I probably won't be able to review much. I'll still accept reviews but don't expect to hear from me until probably the end of April. Those of you who have already requested reviews I plan on getting to before then.
Sorry @Purple but I don't review poetry (I should probably put that in bold in the description). If you REALLY want a review I can do it but I won't be very useful. Sorry it's taken a while to get back to you. :-)


That's ok., :) Have fun on your holidays., :D
*-rock.on., :)
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Sun Apr 27, 2014 8:17 am
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steward and lostthought are done! Nerd Bird I will get to yours soon. So sorry about the wait everyone!
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Tue Jul 08, 2014 6:11 pm
AliceWonderland says...



I was wondering if you could review at least the second chapter to my novel A Song Named Alice. I know it's really long, but I have a habit of long chapters.

Chapter 2 part 1: A Song Named Alice Chapter 2 (part 1 of 2)
Chapter 2 part 2: A Song Named Alice Chapter 2 (part 2 of 2)

If it helps, feel free to check out the first chapter and review it as well. All its reviews are up to date so your information would be new. Thanks! It's greatly appreciated.
  





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Thu Jul 10, 2014 10:10 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there! :) I would love it if you could review my new first chapter Found when you get the chance :) Thank you very much!
  








It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
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