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Wed Jun 18, 2014 8:07 am
TakeThatYouFiend says...



Nothing? pretty please?
You know that studded leather armour in films? Nobody wore that. I mean, how would metal studs improve leather armour?
  





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Sun Jun 22, 2014 12:16 pm
Laure says...



@TakeThatYouFiend, accomplished. *strokes beard*
  





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Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:06 pm
guineapiggirl says...



An as-of-yet unnamed thing about crows, women and wizardry, Chapter 1

Hi! Could you have a look at this? It's the first chapter of this big epic (in my head) fantasy thing I'm writing. I hope you enjoy it, but if not please feel free to tear it apart as I wrote it at 2 o' clock in the morning and my brain's too addled by exams at the moment to know if it's any good myself!
Thanks.
  





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Thu Jun 26, 2014 10:39 am
Laure says...



@guineapiggirl onto it! I find your gender is an oxymoron with your name...
  





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Fri Jun 27, 2014 3:31 am
Laure says...



@guineapiggirl, completed.
  





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Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:39 pm
guineapiggirl says...



Thanks! Great review. Lots of really useful advice, and you didn't kill my piece like you warned! I'll definitely be requesting another review once the next chapter's up!
The name thing... since making my account back when I was 12 or something stupid, I've felt less like I want to be defined by gender, so I guess that's part of the reason for the ambivalence! Also just to be deliberately contradictory :D
  





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Sun Jun 29, 2014 10:29 am
Laure says...



I see,xD. It's cool. Great to know my advice helped, made my day.
  








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