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Mon Dec 16, 2013 3:38 pm
Lava says...



Hey everyone!

If you have a novel in progress with 3 or more chapters, feel free to post them here - I will review each chapter. ^^

Since a novel reviewing is also a bit of a time commitment on my side, I'll take the first two requests for chapter reviews; and put the others on hold.

ETA : I can't review fanfics.

Current list :
1. Trapped in a Fairy Tale World - kman
2. SIlverlock


Have a great holiday season!

Cheers,
Lava
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Mon Dec 16, 2013 10:43 pm
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I have a new novel, Trapped in a Fairy Tale World.
  





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Tue Dec 17, 2013 8:06 am
Snowery says...



Hey lava!! Can you review my novel Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart??
Snow: The Tale of a Cold Heart (Prologue)
This is the first one and you can find the other chapters through this :) Thanks a lot.
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The World Is Mine.
  





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Wed Dec 18, 2013 6:42 pm
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The Blood of Eden {I}



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hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


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Sat Jan 18, 2014 7:46 am
Pompadour says...



Could you please leave a review on my new novel? Thanks so much! :D

Hawk's eye - Chapter One (Working title)
Hawk's eye - Chapter Two (Working title)
How to format poetry on YWS

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Sun Jan 19, 2014 3:43 pm
Yuka says...



Hello!
I wasnt able to post my second chapter yet because i dont have enough points but can you please review the first one?

La Vie En Rose: Chapter 1
  





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Tue Jan 21, 2014 5:01 pm
mephistophelesangel says...



Hello :)

I have started a new novel, Soul's Decay. It has four chapters in all, if you count the prologue. Could you review on them, please? Thank you so much!
  





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Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:58 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there!
Im writing my first novel called The Shifties as part of a planned trilogy :)
If you could read the first few chapters I would greatly appreciate it!
No doubt by the time you come to review, there will be many more chapters on offer to tantalise your reading mind :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/NerdBird/portfolio/462161
  





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Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:24 am
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Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:49 pm
ulala8 says...



The Tales of the Argonauts: The Osorezu and the Hana (Chapter 1-1)
The first chapter doesn't need any reviews, but the chapters thereafter do.
  





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Wed May 07, 2014 7:48 pm
Stormcrow says...



Hi, I have a novel that is 21 chapters. Here is the prologue:

Prologue of The Token (please review! I plan on publishing it. Also see chapters 1-3)
Caleb Julius
  





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Thu May 15, 2014 2:09 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hi Lava, could you review my novel, 'The Perfect Thief' profile/Gaurav009/portfolio/462596

Thanks :)
  





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Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:12 am
joshuapaul says...



Lava,
Only if you have time...
And where exactly is it that we're heading? (URGENT NITPICKS NEEDED)

Any help would be much appreciated.

thanks
JP
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