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Thu Dec 26, 2013 9:16 am
lostthought says...



Got you Dragon and Silver
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Fri Feb 14, 2014 9:45 am
DrFeelGood says...



Need someone to review my short story. The link is:

The Perfect Thief
  





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Mon Feb 24, 2014 6:19 pm
NerdBird says...



I would love it if you could review my second chapter :)

The Shifties: Chapter 2 - Nightmare
  





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Mon Mar 24, 2014 3:26 am
lostthought says...



Got you @Gaurav009
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 3:28 am
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@Oakenshield I kinda can't review that, sorry!
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 3:30 am
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I'm a month late on all of this. So late, everyone already took everything to review @NerdBird and @rawrafied
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 3:34 am
TheCrimsonLady says...



Please review this!!!!

Sorceress: Chapter 5

Thank you sooo much
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 2:54 pm
NerdBird says...



You can review my revised version of Zom-Brawl

The reviews are pre-edit
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Mon Mar 24, 2014 10:05 pm
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@Aurora99 and @NerdBird your reviews are done.
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:29 pm
guineapiggirl says...



If you'd like to review this I'd be most grateful :)

Deciding to Die
  





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Tue Mar 25, 2014 10:58 pm
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Got ya @guineapiggirl
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:17 am
gauravkundu32 says...



hey there, I need review of the chapter I just wrote so i request you to review this Diakrino- the darkness within (chapter 2) and if possible please also review the first chapter as well Diakrino- the darkness within (Chapter 1). I'd be highly grateful to you.Thanks.
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Sat Apr 26, 2014 10:06 pm
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Sorry @gauravkundu32 I didn't get notified in the day period. Just now saw this and it exceeds the 4+ review limit!
"Aaloo is potato in urdu, like AAAAAA-loo, or like AAAAA-look such delicious deliciousness."
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"MY SOUL IS A GREY ABYSS"
-QueenOfHearts
  








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