Wow, I improved that much? Thanks! I'll be sure to get your next review on the way as soon as I can!
*is still working on the clarity.
The reason I got that feeling about Preston is because I used to do critiquing for a bunch of buddies of mine who loved writing crappy vampire/ werewolf romance stories. Not at all my type of reading material, but you were kinda going along with the whole 'mysterious, little bit odd guy turns out to be REALLY weird' formula. Don't change anything though! I like it how it is (I doubt anyone else would get my feeling's duplicated).
Thanks for the feedback!
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