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I''ll review your action.



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Sat Jun 08, 2013 8:38 pm
Caesar says...



It's quite simple, really. I'll review anything that has action in it, no matter the genre. I'll focus on the piece as a whole, naturally, but more in-depth when it comes to action.

Action is very broad, though. What kind of action? Most kinds, really. Preferably involving swords or knives. I'm not too knowledgeable when it comes to ranged fighting. Swords and knives is also very broad, good point. Well, I'm well-versed in most eras. I've read treatises by 15th century Italian masters and Viking age germanic masters, so yeah. You're in (somewhat) good hands.

While reviewing action, I will consider both the technical aspect and the emotional aspect. So, if you feel that you've written a bit of action, but would like an opinion about it, I'm the guy to go to ;)

Cheers.


Edit: this also applies to action in SBs. Naturally, this will take place in PM.
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I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault