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Tue Apr 30, 2013 1:56 pm
Paracosm says...



Come on in, we're Open


Welcome to Paracosm's Review Emporium! I am willing to do a review on any of the following:

Novel Chapters (Any)
Poetry
Short Stories
Non-Fiction

I prefer to read fantasy, sci-fi, mystery, horror, suspense, or literary fiction. I might read romance, or historical fiction. I absolutely do not review writing that is formatted in a giant, huge, obnoxious block. I will gladly review it once it has been broken into pretty little paragraphs, even if the paragraphing is wrong, because I can help with that. I also do not read anything that hasn't been punctuated. Again, the punctuation can be wrong, but I will not read chatspeak or text like this:

silver sequins glittered before his eyes he was dazzled by the dress that hung beautifully over her slender figure

Please format your writing. Thank you!

Please do not post for a request if there are five or more unfulfilled requests, thank you!
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Fri May 03, 2013 3:16 am
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ToritheMonster says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101321#c359205

A little prose piece I wrote, would love a review! Just as warning, it's all broken into nice paragraphs, but some of the inner quote formatting and language is intentionally broken for effect. I am aware of how to use quotes and stuff.

Thanks! :mrgreen:
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Fri May 03, 2013 5:00 pm
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There ya go, Tori! I hope it helps.
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Sat May 04, 2013 7:26 am
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cm57105 says...



Here's a short story that I'd be very grateful if you reviewed it :)

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=101327
If you don't have a trophy case that spins into a secret room with a press of a button, then your an idiot.

Need a review? You've come to the right person.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&p=1143828#p1143828
  





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Sun May 05, 2013 4:09 am
Paracosm says...



Done, CM!
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Mon May 13, 2013 10:19 am
Twit says...



First chapter that I'd love a review on! work.php?id=101411
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Sun May 26, 2013 9:52 pm
HostofHorus says...



Hi there, could you review my piece, "A Dandelion and a Meadow" ? work.php?id=101674

Thanks in advance :)
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)
  





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Tue May 28, 2013 10:06 pm
Paracosm says...



Awesome! I'll get to these soon!
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Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Mon Jun 17, 2013 5:08 pm
Dhendon says...



Hello!

I have a novel with three chapters. I only request a single review, although I would adore for life a reading of all of them, but I have posted the link to the first chapter since that would probably be the best starting place. It is mostly mystery/suspense, but there is a little bit of fantasy stuck around in it. Hope you review it, and thanks in advance!

Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl
  





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Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:57 am
Paracosm says...



Finally getting to it Dhendon!
Review unto others as you would have others review unto you.

Don't panic!

Also, Shino!
  





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Mon Jul 01, 2013 2:10 pm
Rainn says...



Hello! I just finished my poem, and wold love to get a review from you! :)

Undisclosed(edited)
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