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Sun Apr 07, 2013 2:44 pm
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Need a review ladies and gentlemen? Not to worry... I'VE GOT YOU COVERED! I will review any and everything you decided to throw at me. Regardless of the length, I assure to give you an in- depth review about what to work on in editing your piece. My biggest strength is poetry, but I love reading short stories, novels, scripts, and lyrics.

Lyrics are certainly my weakest point in the reviewing process, but I will focus on the rhyming and rhythm of your writing and how to make it sound smoother.

Please only do a max of two works you want me to review per post. You can certainly come back with more you need reviewed after 48 hours though if you so desire. Thanks!


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Mon Apr 08, 2013 3:37 am
Aley says...



work.php?id=100800
Mind giving this a review? Thanks <3
  





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Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:39 am
TheSparrowsAnd says...



Can haz review? (Normally wouldn't ask but it's been a few days and still nothing.)

work.php?id=100765

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Mon Apr 08, 2013 12:41 pm
therealme says...



pretty please may you review this for me? It would be much appreciated.

work.php?id=100784

you da bestest xx
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Tue Apr 09, 2013 4:45 pm
rachaelwillson1 says...



This review would be so helpful! :) thank you so much
work.php?id=100823
  





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Thu Apr 11, 2013 4:00 am
dasiamari says...



work.php?id=100855

Poem. 16+

Please review? :3
Thanks
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