Young Writers Society

Step right up step right up ladies and gentlemen! Dear ol' Dogs here with your free reviews! I guarentee to give you a quality review to anything you give me!

Short or tall,
long or small,
I'll say something to them all!

Come come now! Once in a life time experience! I'll read anything you throw at me, be it a couple chapters from your books or your recent poem I'll give you an in depth review. Assured to get back to you within 48 hours of posting on this wall.

Bring it on.


TuckEr EllsworTh

Well, since you asked so nicely, I do have a piece. It goes by the title Outfoxed and could use some help. In particular, I'd like to know how to tell readers that Bax is an otter.

I have every faith in you, dogs. Let's see what you make of it.

Mine, please! work.php?id=97070 That's the first chapter; there are currently two more after that. Thanks a lot!

Review please? work.php?id=99796

I'd love a review: work.php?id=99841

Hi! I hope you're still up for giving reviews.

I'm really looking for a critical eyes to tell me what needs to change, what is not fluid, and what I can do better as far as descriptions, imagery, tension, and energy go.

profile/BenGrange/portfolio

Here's my portfolio. I've gotten reviews on the first two chapters, and I've workshopped them with my writing group and my editor as well. The third and fourth chapters, though, haven't had as much attention as the others. Would you mind skimming through the first two (you can review if you want) and get hard on the reviews on the third and fourth chapters? You can do it all if you want, I'm just looking for reviews on the third and fourth.

Thanks!

Hey, Tucker! I understand you kind of have a thing for Greek mythology and the sort, so here is an English project that I've been working on. It's a spoken word poem, centered around The Odyssey, and told in the perspective of Penelope.

Would love your helpful feedback on it, thanks!! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100102

Could you please review this? Pretty please?
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work.php?id=100187
plz review this

thanx

I would greatly appreciate a review of my poem Wonderlust http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100106 I offer nothing in return save my eternal gratitude. Plz and Thx

Hey, dogs!
You reviewed a piece of mine before- I titled it "Prologue" but it's now been changed to "Part 1, The Battle". Anyway, I've posted a second part of the story and I'd love if you could review it for me because I think you did a good job last time.

work.php?id=100292

Thank you!

Free reviews I see
This might interest you or not. Muhahaha.
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Hey, dogs! In need of one of your stellar critiques, my fine man!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/edit.php?id=101027

Can you review this for me please

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thanks

Hello:) Could you take a look at this short story I wrote?
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