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Sat Feb 02, 2013 6:26 pm
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dogs says...



Step right up!
Don't be shy!
I'm around, any time!

Please post a link to poem or short story you would like me to review, and I shall hopefully give you one within 24 hours :). Poetry is where most my expertise lie, but I am always more than happy to look over some short stories.

Short or tall,
long or small,
I got something to say for them all


TuckEr EllsworTh :smt032
Be a cool kid and do my Short Story Contest! viewtopic.php?f=404&t=97148&p=1122883#p1122883

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Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:44 am
Morrigan says...



Hi there.

Could you please take a look at this poem for me? I revised recently, and need another opinion. Thank you!

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99409
"So many poems growing outta them they're practically a poet-tree"
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Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:14 pm
mihaivisan says...



hey!
think you can spare a few seconds to review this piece?
many thanks!

work.php?id=99531
"And though I'll think of you I guess
Until the day I die
I think I miss you less and less
As every day goes by"
  





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Wed Feb 06, 2013 4:14 pm
mihaivisan says...



thanks for your review, I got another one for you, if you care to help out a bit more :)

I appreciate it!
work.php?id=99586
"And though I'll think of you I guess
Until the day I die
I think I miss you less and less
As every day goes by"
  








For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle