Young Writers Society

Hello there, This is suspense/mystery story, please review work.php?id=101279

Do you guys review scripts? I wrote a screenplay last April for Screnzy and just went back through it doing some minor editing, but I know it needs help. Mostly because it's my first-ever script of any kind. "Haunted Mansion" meets "Dracula," except I've never seen or read "Dracula" so I don't know if that description is entirely accurate. Let me know!

Ode To the Victim and the Killer

Could you guys review this please?

@Biluata

seeminglymeaningless, Light_Devil, and Patch haven't been active in at least a year, so I would recommend requesting reviews from someone who is a bit more active.

@seeminglymeaningless

I'm editing in a [Closed] to the title so other members don't make the same mistake. Feel free to edit it out if you want to revive this thread.

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