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Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:49 pm
DevanEWilliams says...



Yes, hello. I am Devan. I can review things. I give really long, detailed reviews and I spend a whole lot of time on them.

What I can review:
Short Stories
Poetry
Scripts: Sure, why not?
I -can- do novel chapters, but if it's not near the beginning of said novel I don't know if I would have time to read the previous chapters, so I'd have to treat it like a short story and read/review it separately.

Some might say that my reviews are quite harsh. I would happen to agree with that. If that is what you're looking for, then congratulations! You've found the right place.

Thanks!
Stay away from limbo bears.
And always have extra marshmallows on hand in case of emergencies.

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Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:52 pm
Blues says...



Can I be your first customer? :D

work.php?id=98633

Thank you so much!
  





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Sat Dec 29, 2012 8:56 pm
elcuidador says...



I'll be your second :D

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Thanksssss.
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Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:49 am
shulchan says...



Can you review this? Please be as harsh as possible!

The Adventures of Conrad

thank you in advance! :)
  





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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:13 pm
AliceDreams says...



If I could join your long line of customers I'd be very honoured! Any reviews would be much appreciated and I'll try to review back.

work.php?id=98795
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2013 12:06 am
DevanEWilliams says...



First two have been done for a while, but I should get to the second two within the next couple of days! :)
Stay away from limbo bears.
And always have extra marshmallows on hand in case of emergencies.

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Fri Jan 04, 2013 1:59 am
JohnLocke1 says...



I would love if you would review this Fantasy novel of mine. I have had it posted for a couple of days with no feedback. I would be grateful if you would read it!

work.php?id=98700
"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke
  





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Tue Jan 08, 2013 2:57 am
DeepBlack says...



Can you reveiw my novels first 2 chapters? its called Z-Day!
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 7:38 pm
Blues says...



Hey, Devan! Tasty treats Ahem, could you do me the favour of taking a look at this? xD work.php?id=99033

You know where to go if you need a review!
  





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Mon Mar 18, 2013 12:37 am
DevanEWilliams says...



Just so you guys know, I have not been on YWS in quite a while because I'm horribly busy. For those who have already requested a review, message me if you still want the reviews done, because I'll still be willing to do them, if it's not too late...

But I'm going to have to take a break (or, I guess, continuing to take a break) from YWS, and so cannot do any further reviews besides what has already been asked of me. I'm terribly sorry!
Stay away from limbo bears.
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Wed Mar 20, 2013 11:57 pm
psudiname says...



could you do my the first chapter of a novel I've started writing?

work.php?id=100417

thanks!
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  








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