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Sat Feb 08, 2014 1:11 am
lakegirls says...



Hey! Could you review my first & second chapter? Here's the link for chapter one & there's a link for chapter two in a comment on chapter one.

The Good Life - Chapter One

-Nicole
Writing is the only thing that, when I do it, I don't feel I should be doing something else.
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Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:55 am
Mirfain26 says...



Could you please read and review my short story http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108465 ....Did I link it right?
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Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:59 am
megsug says...



Hey @Mirfain26,
I'd be happy to give you a review (and welcome to the site). To give a link, just put your link in this bbcode: [url][/url]
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Tue Feb 11, 2014 7:12 pm
megsug says...



@Isha done... until she updates her story (which is worth checking out if anyone's looking for a read...)
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Tue Feb 11, 2014 9:40 pm
megsug says...



@lakegirls is finished!
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Tue Feb 11, 2014 10:11 pm
megsug says...



@Mirfain26 done as well. Who's next?
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Wed Feb 19, 2014 9:54 pm
NerdBird says...



Hi there! Nerd Bird here! I would greatly appreciate it if you could give my first two chapters a once over :)

Chapter 1:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108653
Chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108737

Many thanks! :D
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Thu Mar 27, 2014 9:33 pm
megsug says...



NerdBird done~
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Fri Mar 28, 2014 1:13 pm
DrFeelGood says...



Hi! I have posted my first chapter of the novel. There are some reviews but mostly about grammar. I request you to tell me whether the plot is engaging.
(I have no problem, if you say, that it was stupid).
The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1
  





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Wed Apr 02, 2014 4:52 am
spiritwolf1011 says...



Hey. I was wondering if you could review the fanfiction novel I'm writing. Its my first work so I apologize if it is...well...terrible. Its Teen Titans related...I don't know if you like them or not but I still ask if you could give a shot and review (with some really helpful writing tips, perhaps?) Thank you very much.

Prologue
The Shadow's Light: The Two Thieves - Prologue

--Spiritwolf1011
  





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Thu Apr 03, 2014 6:16 am
gauravkundu32 says...



hey there, I need review of the chapter I just wrote so i request you to review this Diakrino- the darkness within (chapter 2) and if possible please also review the first chapter as well Diakrino- the darkness within (Chapter 1). I'd be highly grateful to you.Thanks.
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Tue Apr 15, 2014 12:16 am
megsug says...



@Gaurav009 done, unless he wanted me to review is prologue too?
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Tue Apr 15, 2014 6:43 pm
Zarhail says...



I'd like somebody to critique my Intro, I'd love to hear something constructive or at least an opinion on the voice/tone/pacing/choice of words and maybe even plot so far.
  





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Thu Apr 17, 2014 12:12 pm
Certainly Love says...



Here's mine! :)work.php?id=10705http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=10536
Sincerely, Amanda R. Holden, Author of Azyea's GIfts
  





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Thu Apr 17, 2014 2:32 pm
joshuapaul says...



Hello,

Project: Dead Anna (Chapter 1)

Would much appreciate a little feedback on this...
Mainly looking for feedback on readibility and not so much nitpicks. Thanks
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