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Omni says...



Closed due to inactivity and lack of time XD sorry guys.

Spoiler! :
Heya all, Nate is BACK! And he is planning for YWS domination by upping the amount of reviews! So here I am wanting review requests!

Okay, so just to prepare you all, I want to show you the new layout of my reviews.

I will begin with an introduction: Something like, hey guys! blah blah blah blah blah blah blah!

I will explain how my categorizing works: Basically, I will review with the aspect of two categories with a number of various subcategories in each one. Grammar and Storyline.

I will do Grammar then, explain the good and mostly the not-so-good points.

I will then do a Point System. It is basically a 10 point system, 1: my stuffed dolphin could write better than that. 10: Did God send this to you in your dreams? (NOTE: I will basically not ever use 10, because there is almost always room for improvement in grammar, even if I don't see it.)

I will do Storyline then: Blah blah blah blah blah!

I will then do the same 10 Point System. I do give people perfect scores on this one if I think they are very good.

I will then end it off with a usually good remark and a "farewell"

BTW: I don't do quotations, because when I try, the systems just farts and it doesn't work, and then I sometimes hear faint laughter from my computer...

I want to review your work, and I hope you want me to review your work. Always remember and never forget: Reviews are my candy, and I LOVE candy!!!
Last edited by Omni on Thu Mar 21, 2013 9:51 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sun Feb 17, 2013 3:19 am
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Hey, I liked your reveiw for my work Titanus, so I was hoping you might reveiw this little piece. It is meant to open up a setting and set of characters for more stories, so please do as many storyline reveiws as you possibly can as a human being... if you are...





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Sun Feb 17, 2013 4:09 am
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I will review it when I get the chance!
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Mon Feb 18, 2013 2:59 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



If possible, I would be very grateful if you could review this.
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:17 am
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Done with both of you! Give me more, the candy goes away fast!

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Mon Feb 18, 2013 4:30 am
Wherethewindgoes says...



If you are in that much need of things to review, perhaps you can review this as well...http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99671

And then I shall have to return the favor, I think.
But if the silence takes you, then I hope it takes me too.

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Fri Mar 22, 2013 6:40 pm
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