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Sat Nov 24, 2012 3:55 pm
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MiaParamore says...



Hey, people! ^_^

So, I have been dead on YWS for quite some time and reviewing again always makes you active. So I decided to open a WRFF thread all over again. I do have another one, but I just felt opening a new one would be better.

You all must know the drill.

Leave a link to your work, and I'll review it ASAP. In case I can't, I'll let you know. It might happen sometimes because I've got crappy internet connection these days. Don't know why.

Also, here are the things I'd review and not review.

-Fiction(except for heavy fantasy-like dragons, dungeons, mythology, etc. etc.)
-No Action involving Assassins. xD!
-No poetry. (I can read it for you, leave a sweet li'l comment but I am no good at reviewing poetry)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  





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Mon Nov 26, 2012 6:13 am
Lumi says...



While it's technically poetry, I think my style is prosaic enough for you to rip apart - at least a little. If not, I'll take your lovely comment with a lovely love.

Either way, I'm at your mercy. (it's not love if it doesn't hurt!)
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Tue Dec 25, 2012 12:59 pm
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momentsidream says...



MiaParamore wrote:Hey, people! ^_^

So, I have been dead on YWS for quite some time and reviewing again always makes you active. So I decided to open a WRFF thread all over again. I do have another one, but I just felt opening a new one would be better.

You all must know the drill.

Leave a link to your work, and I'll review it ASAP. In case I can't, I'll let you know. It might happen sometimes because I've got crappy internet connection these days. Don't know why.

Also, here are the things I'd review and not review.

-Fiction(except for heavy fantasy-like dragons, dungeons, mythology, etc. etc.)
-No Action involving Assassins. xD!
-No poetry. (I can read it for you, leave a sweet li'l comment but I am no good at reviewing poetry)
  





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Fri Dec 28, 2012 4:28 am
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MiaParamore says...



Anyone interested?
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore
  








When your heart gets pierced with arrows, don't rip them out and pierce those around you in retribution for your hurt. You'll only unnecessarily wound others and bleed to death yourself.
— LadyMysterio