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Thu Nov 08, 2012 8:41 pm
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WaitingForLife says...



Heya, good of you to visit!

Been a bit slow on getting back into reviewing, so force me into it, please.

I'll review any short story or novel. Expect a thought-out, detailed review with a little humor thrown into the mix. I don't mean to brag, but I don't do things half-assedly.

I'll get to the reviews as fast I can manage, but if you request thirty chapters' worth of reviews, it would be healthy to bear in mind that it'll take a while.

And hmph. If you really must insist, I can bend to poetry, but don't expect anything major or overwhelmingly insightful. I can tell when a poem sounds good and most of the time can find a reason for why it doesn't if it doesn't, but that's the extent of my knowledge on that. Ask for poetry reviews at your own risk. *shrugs*

So. Stories. Novels. Even poetry. Post the link, if you wish a review.
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Sat Nov 10, 2012 2:27 am
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DiskElemental says...



Do your worst.

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EDIT: Review was thorough and very helpful. +1
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Mon Nov 12, 2012 10:55 pm
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Shady says...



Hey Ait!

This is chapter five of my novel: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97541

A review would be greatly appreciated! :D

(The previous chapters are in the same folder, if you want some background)

Thanks.

~Shady

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Wed Nov 14, 2012 6:53 pm
WaitingForLife says...



Sorry for the delay, I've been busy! Tackling your chapter nows.
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Mon Nov 19, 2012 4:57 pm
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indieeloise says...



Short story review request! Would love a nitpicky review to this~ I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you very much.

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Mon Nov 19, 2012 6:47 pm
WaitingForLife says...



Aaalrighty.
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