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Sun Oct 28, 2012 11:36 pm
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DarknecrosisX says...



Welcome to DNX’s official review thread, where I can guarantee you a quality review for any work you post. Keep in mind, however that I am only human, and the laws of time also apply to myself, but I will get your piece done as soon as I can.

First off, just a few ground rules about what I DO NOT accept.
1. I will not review offensive or trashy works; they are a waste of time.
2. If you deem my review to be overly critical (which I will try not to do) just tell me and I shall apologise; DO NOT aggravate me.
3. Don’t badger me. I will get it done, trust me.
4. Don’t request more than one review every week, other people need reviews too!
5. Make sure you keep up with my posts on this thread before requested a review, some weeks I may be slightly busier than others.

To keep myself organised, here is the order of pieces I’m reviewing at this moment in time:
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I will prioritise pieces that currently have no reviews, because it’s unfair when somebody writes a great work and it isn’t appreciated. Then, I will attempt to mark off the larger writings first (that’s novel chapters and lengthy short-stories), followed by the shorter stuff like poetry and miscellaneous.

The following genres are those which I can deliver the best quality reviews for:

Horror Stories

I love tense, terrifying stories, and although I’m very hard to scare, I can appreciate a fantastic horror piece. I will prioritise this genre over others because it is my favourite, so you can expect a detailed and quality review from me if you need one!

’Swords and Sorcery’ Fantasy

This is, basically, fantasy that isn’t sugar-coated: violence, war, death and mature characters are main conventions in this sub-genre. I greatly enjoy these style pieces, so if you need a review under this category, feel free to request!

Realistic Poetry

Poetry that deals with deep issues and the reality that we face in the modern world: no soppy romance or depressing emotional torture, just straight-talking themes that we see in the everyday world.

Comedy

I love a good laugh, and YWS hasn’t got enough humour, so it’s a win-win! I’d love to review any funny pieces, whether they contain dry or tongue-in-cheek comedy, but no trashy works; they just aren’t funny.


That’s about it, although there are somethings that I don’t particularly enjoy reviewing, they’re barely worth mentioning, so request away, I look forward to seeing everyone’s stuff!

Regards
DNX
Last edited by DarknecrosisX on Fri Jan 11, 2013 2:07 pm, edited 16 times in total.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Mon Oct 29, 2012 2:40 am
Shady says...



Hey DNX!

I've got a fantasy piece. I'm still working on character development/ building up suspense, but it's not sugar coated. I don't like that either. ;)

Anyway, if I annoyed you with my review, you, obviously, don't have to do me any favors. But, if you do have time, and the inclination, then this: work.php?id=97541 could use some love. It's chapter 5, but it's in the same folder as the rest.

Thanks! :D

~Shady

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"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
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Mon Oct 29, 2012 8:54 am
DarknecrosisX says...



It shall be done.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:58 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Reviewed, nice piece of work.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Tue Oct 30, 2012 11:32 pm
aouther2b says...



Hi I was wondering if you can review this piece. I am very new to poetry and want an honest opinion if I am any good at it. Thanks! :) work.php?id=97797
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Thu Nov 01, 2012 5:34 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Done, I hoped you like the review. I'd be perfectly fine with reviewing anymore of your stuuf. Just ask! :D
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Wed Nov 07, 2012 12:53 pm
ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey DNX,

Would you please review this for me,

work.php?id=97866
  





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Wed Nov 07, 2012 1:22 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Oddly enough, I was looking at that the other day. It shall be done.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Wed Nov 07, 2012 6:27 pm
Z03Kill3r says...



Hey Rich! I just submitted my first piece, and it'd be great if you could review it. Thanks!

work.php?id=97885
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Thu Nov 08, 2012 7:42 am
DarknecrosisX says...



Thanks for your requests guys, but they may not get done until this weekend, I have a German oral exam to prepare for.

Sorry for the inconvenience.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Thu Nov 08, 2012 7:10 pm
DiskElemental says...



Do your worst
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A man without a plan, or anything else for that matter. (Except a review thread).
  





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Wed Nov 14, 2012 9:30 pm
WaitingForLife says...



Heya. ^^

Your thoughts for a penny.
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Thu Nov 15, 2012 10:40 am
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I shall get both of yours done over the weekend.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  





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Sat Nov 17, 2012 10:15 am
Hecate says...



Hey! Can you please review my Short Story? It's 1,500 words long.

work.php?id=97975
  





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Sat Nov 17, 2012 8:02 pm
DarknecrosisX says...



Can do.
Laments of passion
Obstructed by fear.
Under guises of jovial chatter;
Incredulous hopes
Steadily feasting away-
Eating away at my heart.
  








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