Hey! Then I'd be eternally grateful if you can do the one I requested right before you announced your break I am desperate for as much feedback as possible from any source.
I am planning on sending this in the form of a condolence letter to the families of those involved in the Sandy Hook incident, so it's really important to me to be as perfect as possible... I would really love a nitpicky review, and feel free to be as harsh as possible! work.php?id=98404 Thank you!
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors, and trying to convince my shadows that I am someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco
Hi! I'm working on a fantasy novel right now, and I was wondering if you could review the first page and 1/2 or so before I continue with the chapter? Thanks!
I would love to have someone review this. The formatting screwed up. But the content is all there. I would love your honest thoughts, responses, feelings, emotions, questions, and anything you have to say.
And on the pedestal these words appear:/'My name is Ozymandias, king of kings;/Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!'/Nothing beside remains. — Percy Bysshe Shelley
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