Young Writers Society

Sorry guys, I'm not accepting any requests until the 26th of November. Blame the mock exams for that.

Sorry for any inconvenience.

Back up for business! Exams were moved to December, so keep your requests coming in!

Hey! Then I'd be eternally grateful if you can do the one I requested right before you announced your break I am desperate for as much feedback as possible from any source.

Done. It was fantastic.

FEED ME MORE

I had hoped that I'd get more reviews for this so...please?
work.php?id=98022

Can do.

work.php?id=98150 it's not finished yet... and I need a title. Thanks for any help you give

I'd really love if you could review the first chapter of my novel, Black as White found here: work.php?id=98145

It's a dark, magic realism novel with a complex story. At least, I like to think it is.

Thanks.

Hey, I'm wondering if you could review this preview from my first chapter... Ignore the paragraph problem please.

work.php?id=97564

If you want to read more, just PM me and I'll send you it, that works fine for me... Thanks

nice one

Hey. I was just wondering if you could review my latest work. It's a horror poem, if that makes any sense.

Here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=98219

Just wanted to know what you think. Thanks!

I am planning on sending this in the form of a condolence letter to the families of those involved in the Sandy Hook incident, so it's really important to me to be as perfect as possible... I would really love a nitpicky review, and feel free to be as harsh as possible! work.php?id=98404
Thank you!

Hi! I'm working on a fantasy novel right now, and I was wondering if you could review the first page and 1/2 or so before I continue with the chapter? Thanks!

http://mnkeygrl11.writerfeedpad.com/2

I can't review that- I'm not on writerfeedpad. Still accepting requests, though.

I would love to have someone review this. The formatting screwed up. But the content is all there. I would love your honest thoughts, responses, feelings, emotions, questions, and anything you have to say.

work.php?id=99270

Thank you!

All my other work is poetry. This work is the only Essay piece that I have written.

Feel free to check out my other works.