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Mon Sep 24, 2012 4:09 pm
MoriartyIsReal says...



I'm interested in getting some more feedback on my short story "When words can't describe" and I would really appreciate if I could get some more good, honest feedback on it. I'm currently trying to prepare myself for a creative writing test/exam and so any advice or improvements you guys have for me would be great!

I am willing, in return, to read any kind of poetry, short story or a chapter (or two varying on length) of a novel. I'm not fussy for any genre, and I will try to give everyone an even and fair review.

If you would be interested, please reply with a link to your writing and I'll get onto it as soon as I can!

Here's a link to my short story: work.php?id=97448

Thank you~
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Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:32 pm
DiskElemental says...



Done.
Mine can be found here: work.php?id=97383
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Sun Sep 30, 2012 9:31 pm
Shady says...



Mine's a chapter, and can be found here: work.php?id=97470

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