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Sat Sep 22, 2012 2:56 am
confetti says...



I haven't reviewed in a while and I want to get back into it.

The only thing I won't review is poetry. I am the worst poet in the world and trust me when I say, you don't want my opinion on your poems. Short stories are preferred, but I will also review novels and any other miscellanies work.

My reviews will usually have a combination of nitpicks and an overall view. I try to not only look at the way it's written, but the characters, plot, etc, too. If there's something you want me to specifically look at, just let me know!

Send away
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Sat Sep 22, 2012 5:28 am
confetti says...



Done!
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Tue Sep 25, 2012 5:33 am
MoriartyIsReal says...



If you could read and review this I would be very grateful ^^
work.php?id=97448

Thanks~
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Wed Sep 26, 2012 8:40 pm
confetti says...



Done.
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Wed Sep 26, 2012 10:16 pm
Sins says...



Hey there, confetti, I have quite a challenge for you...

Would you mind checking out what I have so far of my novel? I've edited the chapters after the reviews I've already gotten, but I still think they need a lot of work so I'd appreciate another opinion.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three

If that's too much, don't worry, just review one of them instead. Please and thank you! :)
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Thu Oct 04, 2012 5:46 am
confetti says...



d-o-n-e
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Fri Oct 26, 2012 2:50 pm
EmmVeePi says...



I would be eternally grateful for a review of my short A Heroin Laced Love Story http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=95536
  





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Sun Oct 28, 2012 3:59 am
confetti says...



done~
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Fri Nov 02, 2012 7:35 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



Hey,

Can I have a review on this please,

work.php?id=97760

Thanks.
  





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Tue Nov 06, 2012 4:55 am
confetti says...



done like dinner
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Thu Nov 15, 2012 9:39 pm
klara1882 says...



Please? :) work.php?id=97947
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Mon Nov 19, 2012 4:55 pm
indieeloise says...



Would love a nitpicky review to this~ I welcome harshness, as long as you can back it up with what you would do different! Thank you :)

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Mon Nov 26, 2012 3:27 pm
BlackXcat says...



work.php?id=98077

Please Doc, Its urgent!! SHE'S A ZOMBIE!

haha, I would appreciate some in put on this.
Be nice
  








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