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Thu Aug 30, 2012 7:23 pm
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TheatreGirl00 says...



Post the link(s) to anything you would like reviewed and I will review it! :D
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:12 am
makennaC3 says...



Hey, Sophie! Could you review the latest of Nicole Pedeare? Heres the link: work.php?id=97190
I haven't even proof-read yet, so knock yourself out! Not literally, of course! Thanks!
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 3:25 pm
mihaivisan says...



hey, i got two short stories

work.php?id=96917
work.php?id=96815

choose one or knock 'em both dead hehe, thank you!
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 5:58 pm
Shady says...



Hey!

Okay, I've recently written chapter three of my novel. It's separated into two parts, though I'm not coordinated enough to post both links. So part one can be found here: work.php?id=97113

It's in a folder with the rest of the work, so you can read the previous chapters and get to part two, via the links under my profile specs.

Feel free to be harsh.

Thanks so much!

~Shady

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Wed Sep 12, 2012 6:47 pm
EmmVeePi says...



Would love a review on my childrens/rhyming/short The Rather Odd Adventures of Daisy - Volume 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97126 Please and Thank You
  





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Thu Sep 13, 2012 7:44 pm
stevie415017 says...



Hi im writting a fantacy book. I know my grammer sucks i honestly just want a what do u think deal i just want to know if u belive it is a good story what you may like to see and what you think is missing. work.php?id=96193 this is the first 3 chapters
work.php?id=96729 this is 4-7
I am only haft way done with the book sooo i know its long just get to it when you can. Thanks
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Thu Sep 20, 2012 8:19 pm
ctlvr1 says...



work.php?=97412

Plese review this. any of you. i dont have any *sadness* :(
  





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Fri Sep 21, 2012 12:06 pm
Jalmoc says...



work.php?id=97397

I'd like some feedback on this. :) I haven't had any...
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Tue Sep 25, 2012 11:55 pm
hopeispeace says...



Well awesome, I just posted this, and I'm looking for any kind of review-idge. (It's a short story that I just kind-of threw up onto my keyboard)

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Mon Oct 22, 2012 3:04 pm
afrounicorn says...



Hello, I am like super new to this. I only have one short story done, and I just did it on the fly can you check it out. I never really share my writing, so this is a whole new experience for me. Thank you- AfroUnicorn work.php?id=97738
  





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Sat Nov 03, 2012 9:28 am
SirenCymbaline says...



work.php?id=97649

A short story. I only ever got one review and I would like more feedback. :)
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Sun Nov 04, 2012 4:57 pm
Aldiv says...



I would love a review. I am mostly just wanting to know what you think of the story and such, any feed back would be great :)

work.php?id=97856
  





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Mon Nov 12, 2012 8:45 pm
Clarity says...



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JO7TZGgBbOw

review please?
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Mon Nov 19, 2012 8:08 pm
JesusLvr18 says...



Can you review my blog post? I can't link to it (I'm on my tablet), so you'll have to find it the old-fashioned way! If you want, you can read some of my poems, but you don't have to. Thanks!

Heidi
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