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Will review poems, short stories and novels/chapters.



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Tue Aug 28, 2012 1:56 pm
Clarity says...



Leave a link and I'll review as soon as I can! :D
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 12:35 am
Shady says...



Am I the first? :shock: *gasp* I am! Aw, I feel so special now! :D

Anyway, your title says that you review novels/chapters. I have the chapter of a novel that needs reviewed. Coincidence? Perhaps.

It is Chapter 3 of a story I am writing, and got too long, so is seperated into two parts.

Part one can be found here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?=97113
Part two can be found here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?=97115

That chapter may not, and probably won't, make sense if you don't know the context from where it comes; as a result, I am providing the link to the Prologue and chapters one and two.

Prologue and Chapter one can be found here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?=95999

And finally,Chapter two can be found here: www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?=96633

Thanks so much for your help!

~Shady

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:22 pm
EmmVeePi says...



I have a lighthearted childrens fantasy-esque story I would love a review on. Thank you much! http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97126
  





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Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:46 pm
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I'll get onto ShadowVyper's then EmmVeePi!:)
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 7:48 pm
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ShadowVyper, i can't access your work. The link lead to a message saying "Um, nothing is here bro."
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Wed Aug 29, 2012 8:08 pm
Bobbywalker says...



If you want to review my novel, jut PM me :) I have three chapters yet :)
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:10 pm
klara1882 says...



work.php?id=97088 :))
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:24 pm
Clarity says...



klara, I'll get on it, just gotta get bobby's done :)
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 8:57 pm
Shady says...



This...is very weird.

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:39 pm
Clarity says...



what is very weird? And can you try and send the links to your work again? I couldn't get to them last time...
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:39 pm
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Or, I'll browse for it...
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 11:36 pm
Shady says...



What is very weird?- the page that my link takes you to.

But let me try this link again:

work.php?id=97113

That's part one, and if it works, then you should be able to follow the link on the right side (under my specs) to part two. Let's see...

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 11:38 pm
Shady says...



*Gasp* it's actually working! Yes! Victory is mine!

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Aug 31, 2012 6:03 pm
Clarity says...



i'll check it soon. :)
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:29 am
Incandenza says...



I'd really appreaciate a review on this please,

work.php?id=97176

thank you
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