Young Writers Society

got two short stories, a review on either would help me bring down this writer's block i'm currently facing. many thanks!

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Okay, I need to do Shadow's first, then Incandenza, then... Sorry, for got last one... But you too!
Sorry if you needto wait. But they will be done today!

can you review this for me please..
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thanks a lot.

A review on the first few chapters or so (as much as you'd like to read basically, as it's quite long), of this would be great work.php?id=97245. Unfortunately I still haven't recieved a proper review on it. Thank you so much!