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Mon Aug 27, 2012 7:19 pm
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makennaC3 says...



Just post your link here and I'll get around to reviewing it. I'm not picky, so I'll review anything for you. I don't want anything in return, so post here if you want a review!
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“Fang: 'Man, You weigh a freaking ton! What have you been eating, rocks?'
Max: 'Why, is your head missing some?”
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Tue Aug 28, 2012 1:54 pm
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Clarity says...



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There is a prologue to this aswell, so if you don't mind, could you review that too?
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


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Tue Aug 28, 2012 2:39 pm
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makennaC3 says...



Sure! No problem, I'm on it!
“Fang: 'Man, You weigh a freaking ton! What have you been eating, rocks?'
Max: 'Why, is your head missing some?”
― James Patterson, The Angel Experiment
  





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Wed Aug 29, 2012 11:12 am
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TheClosetKidnapper says...



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My first chapter. The prologue is linked if you want to read over it -heck, you can go crazy over that too- but I'd like to get something done with this piece first.

Thank you!
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Wed Aug 29, 2012 5:20 pm
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EmmVeePi says...



I would love for you to review my childrens rhyming fantasy story. Please and thank you. http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97126
  





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Thu Aug 30, 2012 3:20 pm
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makennaC3 says...



Ok, so EmmVeePi I reviewed yours. TheLuckyTurtle, I read yours, but did not have time to read your prolouge, I'll get around to it later.
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Max: 'Why, is your head missing some?”
― James Patterson, The Angel Experiment
  





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Thu Aug 30, 2012 5:08 pm
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klara1882 says...



I'd love if you could give me an advice. work.php?id=97088
But they all didn’t see the little bit of sadness in me.
  





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eyeofthestorm says...



work.php?id=97054
I'd love if you would review this for me. I really don't write that much "happy stuff" and I could use a little feedback.
Bilbo: What have I got in my pocket?
Gollum: Handsies!
Bilbo: Nope, guess again.
Gollum: A knife! No, no...
Bilbo: Wrong again.
Gollum: String! Or... Nothing!
  





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TheatreGirl00 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=97130

That's the zombie story I was telling you about! :)
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